Apotheosis: Chapter 16 - Resolve

Dec 01, 2006 21:16

    "Ichigo!" Isshin looked up from his dinner with a wide smile as Karin and Yuzu tackled their brother. "We thought that was you. Sit, eat, Yuzu made plenty."

"Ichi-nii!" his sisters chorused. Ichigo bent - not as far as he once had to - to embrace them.

"What are you doing home?" Karin demanded.

"Are you back to stay?" Yuzu asked ( Read more... )

renji/ichigo, apotheosis, fanfic, bleach

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trash_fantasy January 3 2007, 04:36:21 UTC
sqqquuueeee!!! so he really did stay!!! i think i almost CRIED when i read the letter. again, it is awesome!!! *squees again*

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akuni January 3 2007, 04:38:59 UTC
Awww! *points to endless supply of tissues* It's a bit overwhelming, isn't it? :)

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kyriani January 3 2007, 04:42:56 UTC
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
*still giggling like a complete and utter fool!*
^___________________________________________________^
*starts doing the incredibly happy dance and gets embarrassed and stops*
*deep breath*

"Man, they got no idea what they let themselves in for, givin' ya that cloak." Omfg never truer words were spoken! :D I can't wait to see things play out. ^___________^
I Isshin for a father! Even completely off his rocker. :D I so completely love this line: "Ichigo, you have to live with your feelings. You can't just push them aside when they make things complicated." And of course this one... "Oh Ichigo, Daddy is so happy!"
And Renji's emotions tearing him up inside and Ichigo's love letter, and the cloak (poor Zangetsu heh). And smex in the office! ^__________________________^
Gah 'still grinning and giggling like an utter fool!

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akuni January 3 2007, 04:59:09 UTC
*giggles* Do I need to pad the walls to protect the bouncing fangirls? :P

Isshin is just fantastic. He's a complete and total nutbar, and yet somehow he's one smart cookie. Thank you, KT, for such a fascinating character.

Renji and Ichigo had some serious angsting to do, didn't they? But things look good now. ^_^ Office smex is always fantastic!!

Ichigo's letter... so sweet. :D He really wanted to write a letter back to Renji, and that was the perfect opportunity. As for Zangetsu & the cloak... wait and see how that is gonna be handled - in the next story. ^_^ (SORRY, DON'T KILL MEEE!)

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kyriani January 3 2007, 05:14:58 UTC
"As for Zangetsu & the cloak... wait and see how that is gonna be handled - in the next story. ^_^ (SORRY, DON'T KILL MEEE!)"
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! ;p
Thats... fine... I'm perfectly controlled. ^_______^;
No really. :D The padded walls are pretty and fun and happy! O_O

I definitely <3 Isshin's fascinating character. ^___^ I love the little bits we have seen of him and Ryuuken's interactions as well... o_O; Man I had so many typos in my previous comment, it hurts. >_<;;; Meant to say I want Isshin for my father. ;)

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akuni January 3 2007, 05:19:00 UTC
See, I'd go DRINKING with Isshin, but I wouldn't want him to be MY dad. O_o I'd get tired of having to put the smack down on him all the time, for one thing. :P

The rubber walls are covered with pics of bishes, of course they're pretty. ^_^

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what! anonymous January 3 2007, 04:56:13 UTC
Um please tell me its not over?

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Re: what! akuni January 3 2007, 04:58:45 UTC
Of course not; there is a proper ending. Check the main story page for more information. There are two chapters left to go!

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Re: what! raishiindo January 4 2007, 17:43:06 UTC
Aww! only 2 but its such a great story.

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akuni January 3 2007, 12:42:04 UTC
That is a surprise... I don't think I would've thought to use that word. A lot of reviewers are thinking about marriage and rings and such, but I honestly wasn't putting things in those terms in my head. I've been thinking about a bigger concept of 'family'. That's not to say that the interpretation is WRONG, it's just different and unexpected. :)

Isshin's strange wisdom makes me smile. There are a couple spots in the manga where he's all serious and profound (however briefly), and I think it's a nice counterpoint to his regular insanity.

Sentimental is good! *hands you a tissue just in case* :)

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akuni January 3 2007, 21:16:41 UTC
Well I won't argue, for sure! That's what my marriage is about, so I hope theirs is at least that good, too. :)

They have a solid partnership, and hells yeah they're being monogamous! I don't think I could ever write them differently - I'm too bound up in their emotions, and there's no way I want to write through the pain, betrayal, guilt, etc, that goes along with infidelity.

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kashinosei January 3 2007, 16:14:09 UTC
Ichigo's decision is what most of everyone has in puzzle. What I want...

It was so damn true. When did decisions made being based on others... This is what Ichigo wants and yes, that is what Renji wants. Oh draling, say it out out, I want Ichigo and Renji!!!!

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akuni January 3 2007, 21:17:26 UTC
^_^ I agree! We all need to take a lesson from these guys, and realize that it's OK to live our lives for ourselves.

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