Bleach fanfic - False Alarm

Oct 30, 2008 20:29


Title: False Alarm
Author: Akuni
Universe: Bleach
Genre: Romance, Humour, WAFF
Rating: PG
Pairing: Ichigo/Urahara
Spoilers: SS arc
Word Count: 1198
Summary: Ichigo can't get a minute's peace with Urahara around.

A/N: Oh my goodness, I did it! conjure_lass and I challenged each other to write against our happy ending natures for the Halloween “Come As You’re Not”Read more... )

come as you're not, fanfic, urahara/ichigo, bleach

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sickletongue November 1 2008, 07:21:33 UTC
haha!!

Your hips don't lie

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akuni November 1 2008, 12:33:42 UTC
*snicker* No, no they don't.

Your icon made me snort! :P

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kerumica November 1 2008, 23:07:23 UTC
Egads! This is pure love :D Thanks so much for sharing.

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akuni November 1 2008, 23:09:47 UTC
Whee, thank you for reading! This was pretty fun. :)

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annieroo2 November 2 2008, 19:06:25 UTC
ROFL! This was all kinds of awesome. I actually really like this pairing when it's done well like this. I think the balance for them is hard though, Ichigo being so serious and Urahara... well not so much. ;)

You really made that work for them here, though. The fake hollow alert from Kisuke and Ichigo's resignation and giving in was so fun. The flashback to the start of their relationship was hilarious and somehow fit them both perfectly. But the role playing had me laughing so hard it hurt. My side still hurts. Ichigo in falsetto is just too funny.

This was really great. :D

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akuni November 2 2008, 19:15:25 UTC
Woo~! I aimed for extra fluff, but I'm glad that they still felt right.

Ichigo surprised me by turning tables and pre-empting Urahara's joke (lol the sound of his falsetto in my head just kills me!). Part of me wonders if he did it because he was afraid Urahara would want to play for real. *snicker* I think it's nice to see that being with someone just a little bit crazy has helped him learn to lighten up just a tad.

Urahara will never change, though. Why bother just calling Ichigo when he could play an elaborate trick? *g*

I'm so glad you liked this. ^_^

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sekra November 4 2008, 03:02:11 UTC
*Dead on floor*

Oh, Urahara. I love you long time, Geta-boshi. ♥

Though I can't quite figure out if he'd be a fun or extremely irritating lover to have. At least we know Ichigo isn't the type to put up with anything vaguely annoying for long :D

I do love your Urahara!voice though, very much. You should write him more often, I say.

And also you seem to like getting Ichigo blind-drunk in order for Big Important Matters of the Heart to be said (or slurred, as the case may be *g*). I approve of this trend!

Loved the entire thing. ♥♥♥

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akuni November 4 2008, 03:08:47 UTC
Hehehe, bit of a surprise from me, eh? :)

I think he'd be fun and irritating all at once. He's extra skilled that way. :p Ichigo would put up with the annoying times despite himself, because Urahara would so make it worth his while. :D

Writing Urahara is always a blast. I would write more of him if I had more ideas for him.

Ichigo getting drunk is... fun. :D He's so damned repressed about some things, he needs to loosen up and get over it all! You have a point though - I should make sure I don't overuse alcohol as the means! (Even if it is so much fun.)

So glad you liked it! ♥ Are you still about? We didn't SPN squee this week! :o Mail me or something!

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mefie_toi May 6 2009, 19:50:24 UTC
Haha, this is really cute. I'm not a big fan of Urahara in any pairing, but this is very entertaining, and I love the ending.

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akuni May 6 2009, 19:55:33 UTC
Whee, thanks! :) I wouldn't have written this for myself, it's not something I ship, but I'm glad I was given a reason to try it because it turned out pretty fun, if I do say so myself. ;)

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