Ahh I've been jumping around for this; how great is it I just wake up and find this waiting for me?! Incredible. I really enjoyed reading this, it was a great start to my morning. The writing was really well done.
As for plot; I'm soo hoping Aki goes on to have the courage to talk to Mizu about this. I knew there was something going on with those two and that there was a real reason behind him not showing up to go shopping but I didn't want to say anything until I had more to go on. Poor Mizu probably feels bad that Aki doesn't remember when it probably was very important for him.
I really really like the whole Tatsurou and Aki friendship/crush thing going on, I find it's going to be really interesting and I like that they're two completely different characters but they can find middle ground between them to talk on occasion.
Keep up the great work! I look forward to more of your excellent work.
I told you I'd have this chapter up soon <3. You'll have to wait until late next week for the next chapter, but I'll make sure to work on it a bit while I'm gone.
Aki probably will, I don't think he's the type of guy to just back down. Mizu definitely feels bad X_X. I feel sorta bad as out of Sadie; he's one of my 2nd favorite members(next to Mao). Aki/Mizuki is one of my favorite Sadie pairings.
Yeah, it feels like they're really different yet somehow it works. That's just what ended up happening when my friend and I tried rping together; we were curious about what'd happen if Tatsurou and Aki met yet it worked even though we weren't pushing for it to be a pairing. And then she started writing some drabbles with the pairing; so I decided to write this fic <3.
my english is very poor but you make me want to read along lol what you wrote of an image of Aki-san is very reach to my image~ he is silent, black, but shiny althongh Mao's voice make me love Sadie first, I'm very admire of Aki
I don't mind that your English is poor. Really, any comment is nice <3. Glad you like my image of Aki; Mao was the one that got me into Sadie first but Aki became my favorite.
Haawww, I don't feel very well but this and some tea makes everything better <3
Oh lemme quote something: Aki’s gaze returned to the vocalist, and he felt like smiling back; the taller man’s smile seemed contagious. If his hair had been dry, he would have hidden behind his bangs and smiled as well. Instead, the bassist opted for biting his lip a bit, staring straight into Tatsurou’s eyes.
The vocalist moved, tilting Aki’s face towards him. “So stubborn, being serious most of the time..I bet you have a calming smile.”
I realllllyyy loved this bit!! That he bit on his lip to hide his smile xDD And Tatsu's reaction on it..So cool XD
Aki just is generally not the smiley-type of Jrocker and usually when he does smile he always attempts to hide it; whether it be with a hand or by looking away or something. As for Tatsurou..although he's goofy I think he has a serious side at times, too XD.
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As for plot; I'm soo hoping Aki goes on to have the courage to talk to Mizu about this. I knew there was something going on with those two and that there was a real reason behind him not showing up to go shopping but I didn't want to say anything until I had more to go on. Poor Mizu probably feels bad that Aki doesn't remember when it probably was very important for him.
I really really like the whole Tatsurou and Aki friendship/crush thing going on, I find it's going to be really interesting and I like that they're two completely different characters but they can find middle ground between them to talk on occasion.
Keep up the great work! I look forward to more of your excellent work.
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Aki probably will, I don't think he's the type of guy to just back down. Mizu definitely feels bad X_X. I feel sorta bad as out of Sadie; he's one of my 2nd favorite members(next to Mao). Aki/Mizuki is one of my favorite Sadie pairings.
Yeah, it feels like they're really different yet somehow it works. That's just what ended up happening when my friend and I tried rping together; we were curious about what'd happen if Tatsurou and Aki met yet it worked even though we weren't pushing for it to be a pairing. And then she started writing some drabbles with the pairing; so I decided to write this fic <3.
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but you make me want to read along lol
what you wrote of an image of Aki-san is very reach to my image~
he is silent, black, but shiny
althongh Mao's voice make me love Sadie first, I'm very admire of Aki
wait for your next chapter!! I like it very much!
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Thank you <3. I'll have it up next week.
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Oh lemme quote something: Aki’s gaze returned to the vocalist, and he felt like smiling back; the taller man’s smile seemed contagious. If his hair had been dry, he would have hidden behind his bangs and smiled as well. Instead, the bassist opted for biting his lip a bit, staring straight into Tatsurou’s eyes.
The vocalist moved, tilting Aki’s face towards him. “So stubborn, being serious most of the time..I bet you have a calming smile.”
I realllllyyy loved this bit!! That he bit on his lip to hide his smile xDD And Tatsu's reaction on it..So cool XD
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I think too, he seems to me that he become really deep in whatever he does <3
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