My Former Lovers and Her Daughter ~Chapter 7~ Part 2

Apr 28, 2010 10:07


Title: My Former Lovers and Her Daughter ~ Chapter 7~
Author: Ha-chan and her recent craziness (akinoyama )
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Family Life, Romance, bit angst later…
Warning: AU, Hikaru’s girl, Terrible English, Character’s death
Pairing: Yabu x Hikaru, Yabu x OC
Disclaimer: The plot
Synopsis: Yabu and Hikaru met after long years. And each other’s past ( Read more... )

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kawaiimaix3 April 28 2010, 02:44:13 UTC
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kawaiimaix3 April 28 2010, 02:45:17 UTC
Sugoi nee~
Love this chapter :)

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akinoyama April 28 2010, 02:49:53 UTC
Hoo... Mai-chan really sugoi for taking first place nee???
Hontou ni??? Thank you... but I think it's kinda sad in the end...
Thank you for reading and commenting... and Happy Birthday....

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stevenica April 28 2010, 03:07:15 UTC
I'm still crying... and I'll still be crying crying & go on crying next week ( ... )

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akinoyama April 28 2010, 04:08:33 UTC
Hey... my dear... stevenica-chan... don't cry... please.... even if you continue it to next week ( ... )

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stevenica April 28 2010, 04:16:34 UTC
Ha-chan~ I am terribly terribly sorry!
I do realise WHAT AN ANNOYING & ridiculous reader I am~~~
GOMEN NASAI~~~ I am still the biggest fan of your fanfics!
So dun worry~ I won't stop reading this materpiece! And I'll continue reading whatever you post!

By saying 'another child', my point is to let Yabu experience what he'd missed~
Like... he wasn't there when Chihara was born, right? He wasn't there to comfort Hika when she's giving birth~ He wasn't even there to take care of Hika during that tough 10-month when she's pregnant >__< (gd lord~ she was just 18 by then)
Yabu HAS to know his sin (lol)... just make him feel extremely irresponsible & guilty LOL

Sorry Sorry again & again m(__ __)m
Now i'm banging my head on my desk just becoz I've scared my beloved Ha-chan!
I love you nearly as much as I love YabuHika LOL

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akinoyama April 28 2010, 04:42:49 UTC
Ii yo... it's okay...
Ah... you're my biggest fan of my fanfic??? LOL... I feel so honour... And I'm one of your fans for your YabuHika report... Ja... please post another concert report... xP...
Ah... I'm so happy you won't stop reading this... coz... frankly speaking... I give all my best to write this... and I really enjoy writing this story... perhaps... I'm good at doing a request nee???

About that 'another child'... eto... should I reveal it here???? Since Hara-chan also asks the same thing... Ah... I think it'll be great if you discover it by yourselves... LOL....

Owh yeah... Yabu was not there... and it was REALLY hard to our young Hika to go through all of the difficulties by her own self... and Yabu really regretted for leaving her...

Hey... if you feel sorry... stop banging your whatever right now!
Hee... hontou ni??? Aw aw aw.... >//////////////< Thank you so much for saying so....

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lynn_369 April 29 2010, 15:13:09 UTC
I will SERIOUSLY going crazy if u made Yabu die!! >.<
and I really want to slap Yabu's ex right now!! huhu

btw nice chap, u succesfully make me stop breathing reading the last paragraph hahah XP

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akinoyama May 1 2010, 02:49:48 UTC
Hee??? woow now Yabu got many fans who wish he didn't die...

Then just go and slap her...

Thank you for saying so... and for reading and commenting...

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blozzom_zone May 1 2010, 02:26:12 UTC
Another shot could be heard and Yabu fell down on the floor. The last things came to his mind were Hikaru and Chihara.

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“I won’t go anywhere.”

“I won’t leave you and Chihara.”

“I’m not leaving this town. I’ll stay here.”

“I’m going to live here. I love this town… mainly because you and your beautiful okaa-san live here.”

I don't know exactly why, but I feel like I'm going to cry when I read this part, sooo heart touching T^T

and, please don't die otou-chan!!!*hiding devilish smile* lol
can't wait for the next Ha-chan!
and sorry for commenting so late >__<"

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akinoyama May 1 2010, 02:53:58 UTC
Don't people say... you'll remember the ones you love in the last of your live? Moreover if you just promised something to them...

Don't die??? *your devilish smile... really pretending*

You can read it now... I've posted it...
Daijoubu...
And thank you for reading and commenting... Hara-chan

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