[FIC] 1=2 By-the-Sentence Snippets: Preventer-ness

[aki_midori]

Alright. It's been a crazy week, but I'm here anyway, with a new set of sentence-snippets. I'll probably rant about my week tomorrow, because I felt as if I've made a big leap from the land of obscurity into the battle-field, so I'm damn proud of myself.

I'm not proud of the fact that I still can't finish my 1=2 fic, though. *waaah*. Thank heavens

Comments

[bloody_winged]

That was nice^^ That's the first time I read a fanfiction written like that and it was an interesting read^^ I hope to see more soon^^

[aki_midori]

Hi!

I got the idea from a friend in my other fandom, and found out that it's very fun to write. I don't have to think to much, the words and ideas flow without me ever thinking of anything complicated. So they come out quite naturally. I'm very glad they turn out quite well, and I'm even happier when you told me you liked them!

This is actually the fourth installment/collection, but I assure you, there'd be more in the future! Thank you for your wonderful comment! I appreciate your taking the time to tell me what you think.

*HUG!*

[bloody_winged]

That's no problem^^ I believe that if I like some fiction or art the author/artist has the right to know that he/she did a good job. Or if there is something that I think that could be made better that I give some constructive criticism. It's not that much work to write a small comment^^

[aki_midori]

My sentiments, exactly. ^^ Every writer/artist, though practicing their crafts for their own fulfillment, thrives on the feedback of their patrons.

Writers all have something to say. It's nice to know that people listen, and are taking time to tell them they do.

Still, it's an amazing thing to be on the receiving end of a good feedback, so thanks. ^__^ I really appreciate your doing so. ^^ *hug*

[misao_duo]

Ohhhhhhh that was cute! I love how worried Duo got over the fact that Heero was between love and death and the first sentences (about how childwish they were acting) were also rather fun!
I also love Wufei in this!
Great job ~♥

[aki_midori]

Eeee, Mi-chan, you came! *is giddy* Yay for cuteness! Haha, I love the idea of turning the Preventers into a kindergarten school with our boys smack in the middle of it all. ^^ Glad you loved it, too! *solemn nod* Yes, Duo and Heero must be together, in good times and bad, in sickness and health, in life, and way beyond death.

Tee-hee. Writing Wu Fei is fu~un~! I want to play with the grouchy like crazy. ^^;

Thank you, Misao-chan! *hug*

[lilzazu]

haha i loved the Childish bits and *angst* poor Heero! But yes, good thing he's okay. can't wait for more, i loveee these sentence fics!!! XDDD

[aki_midori]

Hi Zazu! Eeee, I'm glad you love the Sandbox Supremacy bits, too! ^^ I always wanted to see them act like kids, but somehow I had to think of a valid reason for them to do so. Then I realized that you don't actually need a reason to bring out the kid in you. ^^ Ze Heero angst came out of nowhere, and I can't leave him hurting, so yea! He's ok!

I'm really, really glad you're loving this! XD Thank you so much!

[caedi]

Really nice~! I love the thought of Heero and Duo living out their lost childhood in the preventers during peacetime, and the allusions to them turning the Preventers headquaters into a schoolyard were very fun XDD and then the emotion in 18-22 was extremely powerful. (is it bad that I love it when Heero's hurt, and Duo's worried about him~ it always seems to be the other way round, and its nice to see that Heero can be hurt too and that he's just as human as the rest of them...)

These sentence fics are great- short and powerful, and I'm looking forward to more~♥

[aki_midori]

Aw, thank you so much! I so love hearing from you. You don't pull your punches, and you mention stuff that would help me improve my writing. *hugs you like crazy* I'm glad I managed to pull of the drama in this collection. I was hurting like crazy at the thought of any one of them getting hurt, but I had trouble finding words to express that pain.

Haha... *whispers* me too, actually. It's not that I want Heero to /hurt/ but I do want Duo to be the one waiting on him, for a change. ^^

Yay! Nice to know that I'm making people happy with my sentence snippets! Thank you so much for the comment!

[orehime]

Very nice! ^_^
I friended you so I can come back and read the others. ('Good Boy manga' - heehee!)

[aki_midori]

Thank you!

I hope you'll have fun reading the others, too. ^__^ I'll friend you back!