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Setting Angels Free, Danny/Allison, PG-13

Oct 22, 2009 01:14

Title: Setting Angels Free
Pairing: Danny/Allison
Rating: PG-13
Words: 14,755
Beta: abusing_sarcasm, who puts up with all my crazy shit. I owe her my first born for making her read this. And daisiesdaily, who also puts up with all my crazy shit. Poor girl.
Warnings: None. Everyone is of age in this fic. There’s nothing explicit, just some foul language and mild violence and ( Read more... )

ai8, one-shot, rating: pg-13, danny/allison

Comments 7

kjanine October 28 2009, 00:11:23 UTC

What an incredible story. It had an excellent flow and was a joy to read. And you got Danny and Allison RIGHT. You made them authentic and painfully human, and you painted them exactly the way I picture them ( ... )

kjanine October 28 2009, 00:22:03 UTC

BTW I'm sorry I was so late with this. I meant to post this yesterday, but I got distracted. I blame this:

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aki_hoshi October 28 2009, 00:34:14 UTC

I DON'T BLAME YOU AT ALL. HEL-LO, KRISTOPHER. *PANTS*

I LOVED THAT LITTLE VID. *FLAIL*

Strangely, I was just looking to see if you were online!

And thank you. I'm so glad I pulled it off. I was just re-reading it myself (though I haven't finished), and I was a little worried it didn't work quite right, but apparently, I'm full of malarkey! lol.

I'm so glad so much of it worked for you, and it seemed realistic. That's what I was going for! Thank you SO MUCH for reading this. I know it's not everyone's cup of tea...perhaps I should advertise it as more of a friendship or something...lol. But your opinion means a lot to me, so I'm very, very happy right now! :D

*hugs* I miss you, bb! :D

kjanine October 28 2009, 00:54:21 UTC

Awww *hugs back* I miss you too! And I really did love the story. It's actually the first Danny/Allison story I've ever read, so you popped my Danny/Allison cherry. ;D

Thread 5

supergreak November 11 2009, 04:15:07 UTC

For a pairing that could be...really pervy, I think you handled this really well. Danny's struggles and Allison's response were really fascinating, and I felt for both of them.

Of course, my favorite part was still when Adam showed up to be Noble Knight Defender and punched poor Danny.

aki_hoshi November 11 2009, 04:24:50 UTC

Thank you SO much, hun! Yeah...when I told Cam about it, she was like, o.O and very antsy about reading it. But I assured her it wasn't as bad as she thought. lol. TBH, though I think it was odd for me to be writing, I really love Danny's struggle with his faith.

And I really COULDN'T write a story about Danny and Allison without a little VengefulAngel!Adam showing up. :3