really nice the ending was cute too and you had a few funny moments to even out the emotions cuz i was sniffing until the yuya attack XDDDDD hahahahha
well do you have a beta reader? its really nice to have a beta reader because usually, when you write, you understand what's happening but it might not make sense to other people so having a beta reader can lower the chance of that. =D
aklsdjf;ashfsadfjljsa yay!!! they are together again!!! (took me sooo loooooong to read cuz my sister all of a sudden wanted to bake....(and i'm the younger one too ==')
you liked it?? i'm glad!!XDD heheh yuya attack, i thought it would it better with funny parts.^^
No, i don't have a beta. i asked one of my friends, but she had so many things to do... Sorry if the fic is a bit confusing and with very bad grammar... i'll try hard to make it good next time!!(and to find a beta too)
It's ok!! you read it, so daijoubu ne?? Thanks for commenting and advicing me!! chuuu~
OMG!! really?? i don't have words to say how much glad i am...
I'm really really happy that you liked it, cried and laughed with it. I'd never thought that someone could like it so much, because my grammar and my way of put my thoughts in words is no good.
Thank you so much for read it, and thank you so so much for your comment!! oh! and i'll thing something for Koyapi ne?
Thanks again!! chuuu~ *hugs*
p.s: i don't hate you for your comment!! i love you!!! hahaha
hehe after reading your other fic i had to read more!! I saw the beginning of notting hill but never finished it but i'm glad i read the end the Nishikato way, if that's how the movie ended too... I loved it! <3
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well do you have a beta reader? its really nice to have a beta reader because usually, when you write, you understand what's happening but it might not make sense to other people so having a beta reader can lower the chance of that. =D
aklsdjf;ashfsadfjljsa yay!!! they are together again!!! (took me sooo loooooong to read cuz my sister all of a sudden wanted to bake....(and i'm the younger one too ==')
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heheh yuya attack, i thought it would it better with funny parts.^^
No, i don't have a beta. i asked one of my friends, but she had so many things to do... Sorry if the fic is a bit confusing and with very bad grammar... i'll try hard to make it good next time!!(and to find a beta too)
It's ok!! you read it, so daijoubu ne??
Thanks for commenting and advicing me!!
chuuu~
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yay the end was wondeful ;))
sweet & lovely....
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ureshi~
thanks for reading!!!
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;))
OMG i love ur icon... ;p
*hugs*
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i don't have words to say how much glad i am...
I'm really really happy that you liked it, cried and laughed with it.
I'd never thought that someone could like it so much, because my grammar and my way of put my thoughts in words is no good.
Thank you so much for read it, and thank you so so much for your comment!!
oh! and i'll thing something for Koyapi ne?
Thanks again!!
chuuu~ *hugs*
p.s: i don't hate you for your comment!! i love you!!! hahaha
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write more please?
and you included koyapi. OMG. those two pairs are just lovable.
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and one of my favourites!!!
i'll try!!
yeah... Koyapi is love! XD
and Nishikato is my otp...
Thanks for commenting!!
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I saw the beginning of notting hill but never finished it but i'm glad i read the end the Nishikato way, if that's how the movie ended too...
I loved it! <3
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yes, that's the end in the movie. This is one of my favourites movies, so i had to do it nishikato way XD
thanks!!
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