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[fic] The Things We Can't Control - Chapter 107 ~Cascade~

Mar 16, 2014 20:31

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warning: violent, pairing: akame, pairing: komaru, warning: character death, fic: twcc, genre: angst, genre: smut, genre: au, pairing: junda, rating: nc-17, warning: graphic, fic: multichapter, fic: ongoing, genre: drama, genre: tragedy, warning: rape / non-con, genre: romance

Comments 16

ext_458754 March 17 2014, 02:32:25 UTC

thanx for the luvly and nice update sweetie =)

prettyorianna March 17 2014, 21:32:30 UTC

You're welcome. Sorry for the delay but hopefully I will have another for you guys this weekend (or sooner), back to the past because we're getting near to the next rescue!

jehanakame March 17 2014, 05:21:53 UTC

Aww.. The trio (even I call them this) really love to tease Jin, don't they?
and there's RyoTego.. I just hope Ryo won't be a bastard.. Poor Tego-nyan~
and I wonder what was yuya going to say?
And the whole Maru and superstition. and bunnies. Somehow I want to laugh hard at this xD The mental image is just killing me!!
Girl.. I need to know more about her..
I like how you made Jin think that Girl didn't connect.

"No, it was more that he couldn’t shake the feeling there was something terribly wrong with how she saw the world around her and interacted with it. She… she didn’t connect…

He wondered if she’d ever had any normal human interaction or if her life was one long string of neglect and abuse. Had there ever been one moment in her life where someone just talked to her or smiled at her without wanting something from her?"

I really love this part~

And yamapi.. Somebody kick his ass!!! >.He's annoying. Really ( ... )

prettyorianna March 17 2014, 21:45:48 UTC

Yup yup! They probably also teased him about the desk blowjob scene also but he wasn't paying attention LOL

I am not sure whether Ryo will be a bastard or not. I keep changing my mind. Guess we'll have to wait and see. Usually these things work themselves out kinda smoothly so I don't worry about it until it's time. Oh, and you'll find out what Yuya didn't say later but I'm not sure how much later.

Maru is fun to write in this.

LOL guess it was worth the fifty gajillion re-writes of those lines of Jin's thoughts on Girl (^_^)

And Yamapi annoys me too. He really needs a thorough ass-kicking. I can think of at least five characters right off the top of my head who would just LOVE the chance to beat him up.

Definitely <3 Kame!!

Well, you're going to (assuming everything goes like I want it) have more twins in the next update. It's back to the past but they'll be in it.

This is not a stupid comment. This is an awesome comment and I thank you for it.

jehanakame March 22 2014, 13:28:18 UTC

Poor Kame. What's his sin to have Jin as his boyfriend? (Well, doesn't mean bad. I'll do the same sin as well if I can get such a boyfriend xD)

I see, you have a jumble of threads in your head that even when it's there, you still have to untangle it first~

can't agree more~

Please, make it as cruel as humanly possible xD

I'm going to read the next update. Exams make me slow~

prettyorianna March 23 2014, 01:05:31 UTC

Be as slow as you want. Exams are important.

Hmm... Kame's sin to have Jin as his boyfriend? Maybe he ate babies in another life. I dunno. Something bad LOL.

Just kidding.

Yeah, serious jumble of threads. Mostly I manage to fake knowing what's going on LOL. Half the time I don't know what's going to happen till I write it. Out of what's left, more often than not what I intended to happen doesn't go quite that way. The characters steal my story from me and make messes and I gotta clean it up LOL. There's a few things here and there that I purposely put in the story to foreshadow stuff that comes later but that's not usually the case. Sometimes characters that are supposed to be minor and have one appearance become huge (*cough cough the twins cough*).

I dunno. Maybe everyone writes like that LOL.

Anyways, good luck with exams and I'll get to work on the next update for you guys.

las_dulces March 17 2014, 07:35:51 UTC

Thanks for the update.
Even the little girl named Girl... keeps me wondering who is she.

prettyorianna March 17 2014, 21:46:26 UTC

You'll eventually find out more about Girl. Don't worry, I won't leave you hanging forever. I'm not 100% when though.

mae0513 March 17 2014, 08:32:55 UTC

Thanks for the update~ ^_______^v

prettyorianna March 17 2014, 21:46:38 UTC

You're welcome and sorry for the delay.

pinkporca March 17 2014, 12:01:38 UTC

Thanks for the update. Loved the part that the three guys were making fun of Jin. What a sucker! But I do understand that his mind was on something else. Can't wait til you uncover who "Girl" is.

prettyorianna March 17 2014, 21:48:25 UTC

Thanks for the comment (^_^)

The three of them also probably teased Jin about the whole sex desk door open thing too but Jin missed it because he wasn't paying attention LOL.

More on Girl... soonish. But as far as who she is, that's not for quite a while.