[fic] The Things We Can't Control - Chapter 103 ~Waiting For the Other Shoe~

[prettyorianna]

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[joatex]

Awww poor Kame...I'm so glad he finally can get that weight off his shoulders. (n_n)

Yay Tanaka! Maru treating the kids like his replacement rabbits is way a creepy.... (o_o) but very hilarious image. (＾▽＾)

Yamashita is blaming Kizuna? But he's the one that wanted to get involved, right? He should be happy Kame (or more like Tatsuya convinced Kame) let him stay even after he was at the rough house...(>_<)

Lol Jin banning from sex and he's the one that begging for it in the end.

I still want to know what those cards mean. Hopefully get to find out soon.

Thanks for the update (n_n)

[prettyorianna]

Despite the fact that Maru went and killed a bunch of people that didn't deserve it (actually kinda tortured some info out of people along the way), I like him in this.

Yup, Yamapi blames Kizuna. Actually, he's really bitter about it.

We're a lot close to finding out the meaning of the cards. I mean, the only reason the meanings have any significance in the story is because of how eerily they match with the character (even though I drew those cards at random from the deck). The bigger point of the cards is just that they're kind of like mirror for the character. Like how Maru's card had blood on it when he found it and then he went on a killing spree and showed up at the church covered in blood himself. The card didn't make it happen but it kinda reflects what happened? Actually, I kinda regretted the cards but by then I was stuck for it so I have to keep going with it.

[mae0513]

Thanks for the update~

waiting for the next chapty~ ^______^v

[prettyorianna]

I'll get started on it straightaway after dinner (^_^) So just give me a couple days.

Thanks for commenting again (^_^)

[pinkporca]

Thanks for the update. I get this creepy feeling that Yamapi is really a spy for Papa K. But everything written does not imply that. Just crazy me over-thinking Yamapi. Thanks again.

[prettyorianna]

LOL that would be telling. Though I will admit I haven't 100% figured out Yamapi in this yet.

Anyways, always glad to hear from you (^_^)

[kaze_no_hisui]

this part full of happiness and sweet scene with akame celebrate their every month anniversary, koki and maru dating and many more. also funny moment, jin ban kazuya with sex but in the end he is the one who is begging \^o^/

hope when papa k execute his plan, kizuna is ready and fight him back >

[prettyorianna]

I think if I was dating Kazuya, I wouldn't have even held out as long as Jin did before begging LOL. Sometimes I think I'm more baka than Bakanishi LOL

I really hope Kizuna is up for anything Papa K can throw at them. He's gotten especially devious over the years so there's already more layers to his plan than Kizuna's uncovered. We'll just have to see how it all goes, I guess. I'm still working out some(read: most) of the details of it. Ah, hell. Truth is, I'm making it up as I go along LOL But at least I DO know three major things so that's something, right?

[jehanakame]

weight-off. fewh~

seriously, Jin should've known better that he's the one who won't survive without touching Kazu. Bakanishi.

Somehow, I want someone to force Pi to be an Uke. no specific reason if one asks. Just because.

Maru is creepily cute (?) The kids are too innocent in a twisted way as well (innocent kids don't hold guns, yo)
on a side note, I'm glad Koki finally gets together with Maru. They're too cute <3

and THE CARDS!!! I don't know, but I love the story 'bout the cards. it's darkly beautiful! Each cards represent the character of the owners so accurately. If it's not too much I want you to include the detail bout what the cards tell regarding the owner in the following chapters (if it's not your plan already). (something like.. the cards doing the profiling(?))

Great update!!! Can't wait for more!! :D

[prettyorianna]

LOL yeah, he was pretty baka over that. I mean, it's his Kazu. Of course he wouldn't be able to keep his hands to himself even after saying that