Elevator~

Mar 18, 2013 12:12

Title: Elevator
Pairing: Daejae
Summary: The duo gets stuck in an elevator.
Notes: this was written for flowerymisha cause it was her birthday a few days ago and I decided to write this for her birthday present~ XDDD
Warnings: MILD SWEARING.

Have you guys made out yet? )

rating ; pg 15, # daejae

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flowerymisha March 18 2013, 05:39:34 UTC
AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

;A;

MY BIRTHDAY FIIICCCCCCCCCC ;A;

Okay so DaeJae! Yeayyyy!

B-but baby P, I have to be honest that I'm a bit confused! Okay, maybe Youngjae was just playing hard to get? (Cos he was like keep on saying no but then he suddenly agreed and in the end they had sex lol!)

I squealed at the 'one date' cos suddenly it reminded me of 'only one shot!' Hahaha!

It was actually best if you ended it at the moment when they finally got out of the elevator (and the rest can be included in a side story or a sequel, but nonetheless it's fine baby ;)) and the ending! Lol what happened, suddenly Himchan got stuck and where the hell is his lovely husband? Poor bb ;;

Thank you for this lovely story bb <333

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akaipenguin March 18 2013, 05:42:48 UTC
OMG UNNIE YOU'RE DAMN FAST I GOT SCARED THERE!! here i am thinking of the name of the other fic and BAMMMM COMMENT!!! shock!!!! shock!!!! DAEBAK UNNIE DAEBAK!!!

i... i don't know what to reply... I SHALL REEDIT IT....later... XDD

and hahahhahahahah it was yongguk who locked him in there~ XDDDD /laughs evilly

AND ANDWE!! THANKS FOR READING AND COMMENTING!!!! <333

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blackheart_lies March 18 2013, 22:43:55 UTC
It seemed a little rushed but i do like it, i like how you made it seem fun. I like fics that have humour in them. (:

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akaipenguin March 19 2013, 08:17:21 UTC
It does doesn't it.... :/ I'll reedit it... some other time...

BUT THANKS FOR LIKING IT!!! ^^

<3

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blackheart_lies March 19 2013, 14:46:14 UTC
I just think you get really excited about what you are writing and it isn't a bad thing but when your idea is really good (like this one) i just wish you'd slow down.
Seriously, you are such a good writer.
I look forward to reading more of your work, you always manage to make me smile :)

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akaipenguin March 20 2013, 02:04:25 UTC
... now that i realize it... what you say is true... OTL And yes, I shall take your advice and plot things out properly and less rushed next time!!!

And andwe andwe... I'm not good... ><

AND JINJA???? IT'S MY HONOUR FOR YOU TO SAY THAT!!!!! <333333

KAMSAMIDAAAAAAA!!!! <333 HERE HAVE LOOOOOOOOOTTTTSS AND LOOOOOTTTSSS OF LOVEEEEEEE!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

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myrto_23 May 31 2013, 18:52:09 UTC
Aw so cute! Perfect~
Gotta love himchan ;)

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akaipenguin June 4 2013, 06:35:56 UTC
XDDDD Himchan is Daebak~ XDDD ahhahahahah

<3 thanks for reading and commenting~

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akaipenguin July 2 2013, 06:56:11 UTC
XDDDD THANKIES SWEETY~ <333

and hehehehe i did write some daejae fics... among the very rare ones... Maybe i should start writing bout Daejae soon (when i have time that is)~ :333

Andddd... i prefer AFF cause they tell me how many people have been reading my fics~ and i get better response there~ :3 it's very lonely here sometimes~ ;wwwww;

I LOVE YA TOO~ <3

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akaipenguin July 6 2013, 03:37:58 UTC
;wwww; okay sweety~ <3

and mhmm mhmm~ i know~ ^^

<3333 love ya too~ <3333

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