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Twilight Fanfic: Being Mrs. Black, Part 14

Jul 07, 2008 21:10

Title: Being Mrs. Black, 14/?
Author: akaibara
Rating: PG
Character Pairings: Edward/Bella. Implied Jacob/Bella.
Summary: Imagine that the Cullens were late in returning to Forks. Bella arrived on schedule, but her life proceeded normally. She and Jacob become the best of friends and with no vampires to awaken them, the wolves don't mature. When he ( Read more... )

fic, being mrs. black, twilight

Comments 37

unwrittenformat July 8 2008, 02:33:24 UTC

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...I'll make a more comprehensive comment after i'm done squealing.

unwrittenformat July 8 2008, 02:56:49 UTC

Ok. I love Edward, and his mood swings. And the garden sounds like Eden.

And I can't wait until trouble starts. Like her dad, he is a cop...what if he goes there....that could be bad. Or of course you know, the mystical wolves...psh.

akaibara July 8 2008, 03:21:24 UTC

He's a moody thing, yes indeed~ I love the garden, it was quite clear in my mind, and a terribly Esme-like thing to have.

Yup~ We're in a touch of an interlude right now, but I needed to give them some time to get to know each other. XD

unwrittenformat July 8 2008, 03:23:52 UTC

Yes but Esme is the mother we all want. So we can have as much of her as you want. I will not complain....oh or an Esme/Carlisle fic? *pokes you*

Of course, and who doesn't want some Edward/Bella lovin? Btw I began to read your other fic, the name which escapes me at the moment, my apologies.

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earmuffitforme July 8 2008, 02:37:44 UTC

GUH... MORE!

akaibara July 8 2008, 03:22:06 UTC

I'm working on it!! XD

sammie_3 July 8 2008, 02:42:51 UTC

wow that is so romantic. in a really sick sort of way. Lol.
They are so cute.

:):):) Very good writing!

akaibara July 8 2008, 03:22:41 UTC

Isn't it, though? XD

Thank you!

dragonsangel68 July 8 2008, 02:42:51 UTC

Brilliant! I loved the change of POV :) They both needed their thoughts and feelings out there.

The final scene was so sweet. It's definitely too late for both of them to back out now *g*

akaibara July 8 2008, 03:23:43 UTC

Thank you! Yeah, I really felt like the fessing up on the whole vampire thing needed to come from his POV. But I'd already done the beginning by that point... so I kept it. XD

dragonsangel68 July 8 2008, 11:43:39 UTC

It definitely had to, so his thoughts are the most important at that point :)

storyofmylife11 July 8 2008, 02:49:08 UTC

*thud* ignore me as I flail about on the floor. I should be done with that pretty soon, and then I'll start with the happy shrieking... :)

akaibara July 8 2008, 03:24:18 UTC

*puts pillows down for your flailing* XD