Twilight Fanfic: Being Mrs. Black, Part 13

[akaibara]

Title: Being Mrs. Black, 13/?
Author: akaibara 
Rating: PG
Character Pairings: Edward/Bella. Implied Jacob/Bella.
Summary: Imagine that the Cullens were late in returning to Forks. Bella arrived on schedule, but her life proceeded normally. She and Jacob become the best of friends and with no vampires to awaken them, the wolves don't mature. When he

Comments

[myowncliche]

You kill me every time with this story. I love it.

[akaibara]

*revives you~* XDD Thank you so very much~

[desert_dolly]

Good lord that ending was....amazing doesn't quite cover it.

I admit it, I have been dying for more of this story. It's so intriguing and I'm genuinely curious as to where this is going. It's like Bella's being split in two right now. I can just picture what she's thinking. I would love to have someone like Edward but the love for one's own child is so compelling...I don't know how they'd make it work.

I'm torn as to what I want to see Bella do, genuinely thoroughly torn. Good job :)

[akaibara]

She is, she really is. There's a part of Bella that cares deeply for Jake, that meant it when she said her marriage vows and wants to be a good wife.

But... the fairy tale keeps trying to drag her in. The prince is standing there, holding out his hand. We're all of us only human. Which of us could resist that?

Not me.

Unfortunately I'm not sure there's a fairy tale ending to this fable.

[desert_dolly]

Yeah it breaks my heart to read that but I just know that which ever way you go you'll do it well. This story is just so awesome I'd be happy no matter how it ended.

[candy_003]

My heart skipped a bit at the last line, I kid you not. Only Edward can make my heart skip with those dashing lines right out of the 1900s. Or maybe i'm just hormonal...

This was a wonderful chapter, I loved the interaction between all the character and I especially loved Esme, she's so wonderful.

I'm glad Bella has given in, I would've melted when Edward said that...

[akaibara]

You and me both~ Chocolate? XD

Thank you very much. I really enjoyed playing with Esme here.

Yes, she surrendered the skirmish, at least. War's not over yet. XD

[candy_003]

Chocolate would be nice, thanks. XD

[unwrittenformat]

May I refer to you as my savior?

[akaibara]

I would in no way want to infringe on your religious freedoms~ XDD

[slicvic321]

OMG!! i just started reading the story this morning! and im SO happy with the outcome! your writing is incredible and the story is great. please post the next chapter soon! :D

[akaibara]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you took the time to read my little fic!