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Apr 06, 2007 00:38

Symphony between a cat and a bird/ II

Prologue to Cordiality

I thought we would never blame each other. We would trust the fragrances that linger still on our clothes and bow humbly to what comes next. I thought a lot on you and your habits. The restlessness under your eyelashes. I was rather wrong to think you would submit with the humility I do. I ( Read more... )

symphony between a cat and a bird, gin/kira

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fakelunacy April 5 2007, 22:29:10 UTC
That was beautiful, can't wait for more. :3

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akai_o April 9 2007, 22:07:08 UTC
Thanks, I'll try and put little pieces like that before every chapter.

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akai_o April 9 2007, 22:10:04 UTC
Lol, if they don't run the division at times, all i seem to write about them is sex, even i had enough of that, heh heh. But I promise there shall be smexing too. Oh the intrigue!!!

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mangust April 10 2007, 08:54:03 UTC
Oh, that was nice! Next chapter please!
I liked your writing language. THough it was hard on me, I'd to reread sentences few times to grasp it's meaning, tee hee ^_^'
Scenes with the cat are good too. It adds reality and atmosphere of everyday life to the story.

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mangust April 10 2007, 09:34:09 UTC
sorry, it's scetchy....


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akai_o April 10 2007, 10:31:12 UTC
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, *half crashes, half hugs mangust* THANK YOU !!!!!!!!!! Tis' perfect!!!

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