Fic: A Batclan Christmas Carol 8

Jan 07, 2009 11:12

Title: A Batclan Christmas Carol - Part VIII
Authors: aiyokusama & vespertila
Prompt: [special prompt #2] Holiday Miracle & T11; P10 Together
Characters: the whole Batclan
Genre: fluff/comedy; a bit of angst; holiday
Rating: PG-13
Words Count: 5258

Summary: When loved ones are near/It's the most wonderful time of the year. -
E. Pola and G. Wyle

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damian, jason, fic, dick, bruce, barbara, stephanie, alfred, cass, tim

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darthbatgirl January 8 2009, 02:02:22 UTC
Food fight for the win!! This was the funniest thing ever and the best thing for Bruce and Alfred to walk into.

And Alfred is the very best - EVER (Is he secretly Santa Claus?)

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aiyokusama January 8 2009, 09:19:18 UTC
Thank you :) and yes, Alfred is the AWESOME.

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firedrake_mor January 8 2009, 04:08:00 UTC
**SPEW** ROFLMAO!

I haven't been following the comic, so I don't know Damian, but the rest of this crew in a food fight just thrills me to death! That was WONderful!

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aiyokusama January 8 2009, 09:22:45 UTC
Thank you very much :)

There isn't a LOT of Damian in the comics and what there is, tends to be inconsistent. So we decided on this version and ran with it.

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jbramx2 January 8 2009, 05:28:00 UTC
omigod, it's over! (sorta) eee, I positively adored this!

kk...loved that Jason gets bowled over by a kiss. kk... and the scene between him and Dick was lovely. The stockings awww!

omigod...LOVED the food fight! I cracked up that Jason threw Cass into the fight. hillarious! (is Jason ticklish? I mean what was that at the end? LOL!!)

ha ha ha, awesome way for Bruce to find his family. Messy food fighting. Love how hard he strained to hide his humor. And poor Alfred. LOL, it's a small price to pay for being sneaky. XD heh heh heh.

(btw, have I mention how I simply adore how Cass is taking care of Jason? And that I simply adore how you guys have written Cass? I adore it!) kk...also love how Steph pushes Damian's buttons.

But awww! what a lovely ending. Making Alfred sit at the table. YESH! thank you! He is made of awesome and deserves to be with them. :) (heh heh, even Damian agrees with that. Yay! points for Damian!)

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aiyokusama January 8 2009, 09:29:55 UTC
Thank you so much :) Cass taking charge of Jason wasn't planned on, it jut happened. Of course, Jay would never ask for help but Cass wouldn't care, she just acts on what's needed.

Everyone was a lot of fun to write but this is really my first time writing Cass, so I'm glad you liked her.

I was a little worried that the ending might be too sappy, but we totally had to have it like that, since "family" has been the theme through out.

Oh! and don't forget, there is still the epilogue to come. It should be up some time tomorrow

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aiyokusama January 21 2009, 12:08:25 UTC
Thanks :) it was a lot of fun to right.

(sorry for the late reply)

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babydracky January 8 2009, 19:32:19 UTC
Awwwwwwwwww!!!This is just so fun!!! I can imagine the Bat Family ruining the kitchen! XD

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aiyokusama January 21 2009, 12:02:03 UTC
As can I :) and thoroughly enjoying themselves in the process. Even Damian, though he'd never admit it.

Sorry it took so long to find this.

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