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aiyokusama

Fic:Confrontation (Bruce)

Oct 17, 2008 22:34

Title: Confrontation (Bruce)
Author: AiyokuSama
Characters: Bruce, Tim, Dick
Continuity: comic verse, vaguely now
Spoilers: None.
Warnings: Angst, violence
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2668
Summery: Bats are good at avoidance
Author’s Notes: Thank you darthbatgirl for betaing this! Here is the next instalment of the Forced Series. If you haven’t done so ( Read more... )

bruce, forced awareness, fic, tim, dick, series

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aiyokusama October 18 2008, 09:32:11 UTC

Thank you :) Dick and Tim SOOOO have their work cut out for them.

darthbatgirl October 18 2008, 13:13:32 UTC

Once again I have to say how much I love this. Your insight into Bruce's mind was wonderful.

aiyokusama October 19 2008, 05:37:19 UTC

Thank you :) I love Bruce's head and yet I fear it so :P

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aiyokusama October 19 2008, 05:40:24 UTC

I'm glad you are enjoying it :)

Oh he is that. Dick's part is next and he is sooooo pissed!

dragonbat2006 October 19 2008, 05:30:02 UTC

Bravo! Really well-written!

aiyokusama October 19 2008, 05:41:03 UTC

*BLUSH* thank you :)

anthraciteowl October 19 2008, 16:38:23 UTC

Bruce, keep it up and Nightwing might even yell at you the way you want him to. Of course, Robin might not let him.
I'm really glad you convinced the Bat to talk to you.
I have a few small nits to pick, if you don't mind:

Lots of time for…to many things.
I think you want 'too', here.

I’m not a child, I haven’t been one for a very long Robine
Robin is Tim, but Robine is not time.

aiyokusama October 19 2008, 16:44:38 UTC

Nitpics are always welcome :)

And "Robine" is what I get for trying to cheat and use the find/replace function :P

Thanks!