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aiyokusama

Dabble for Babydracky

Jul 04, 2008 11:59

Title: The Choice
Characters: Jason, Dick
Rating: PG
Setting: AU, modern day, no capes
Warnings: Angst, language
Length: Drabble
Author’s Notes: This is the AU drabble inspired by babydracky’s prompt. Thanks to
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au, jason, angst, dick

Comments 13

stalinglim July 4 2008, 19:04:45 UTC

*cries* Oh, wow, that's *good*! That may be my favorite thing you've ever written!!!

aiyokusama July 5 2008, 02:35:01 UTC

*blush* Thank you :)

saavikam77 July 4 2008, 19:17:15 UTC

Oh, boys! *hugs them*

I love how open ended this was, with just enough to make you think Jay would probably say 'yes'. Wow. So poignant...

aiyokusama July 5 2008, 02:39:13 UTC

I'm glad you liked it :)

"poignant" seems to be my mantra lately ^_^;;

I promise that the next one will be much more light hearted. Though honestly it's quickly moving out of the realm of being a drabble.

*grumbles about demanding muses*

greeneyelove July 4 2008, 20:37:00 UTC

Damn! That was angst and powerfully done.

Jason, you know you'll do it. Like it or not, you're a good guy.

aiyokusama July 5 2008, 02:41:30 UTC

Shhhhh! Don't tell him he's a good guy, he'll get all insulted :P

Thank you :)

babydracky July 4 2008, 22:03:52 UTC

Awww!!! Thank you!! This is just cute!!!
We all wo knew Jason will do it for his golden bro!
You did great. It is a beautiful text.

aiyokusama July 5 2008, 04:46:48 UTC

I'm so glad you like it :) you're most welcome. I had a good time writing this one. I know you wanted a decision as part of it but it's really not something that can be properly addressed in a drabble.

babydracky July 5 2008, 16:43:53 UTC

This was puuurfect^^

smgriffin July 5 2008, 04:58:02 UTC

I love it - Everyone has the heroic non-conflicted sacrifice of self, and while we can all tell Jason will say yes when the rubber finally meets the road (Er... again?), you're exploring the face he's not a perfect super-human. He's selfish, just like all of us, but that's what makes the right choice so wonderful - He knows exactly what he'll give up, and he decided to do it anyway.

He DID decide to do it anyway, didn't he? *glares threateningly*

aiyokusama July 5 2008, 05:06:23 UTC

Thank you :) Jay is GOOD at selfish, but he also cares for his family.

He DID decide to do it anyway, didn't he? *glares threateningly*

Uh...I don't know ^_^;; we left off before the decision is made.

smgriffin July 5 2008, 14:27:06 UTC

(Uh...I don't know ^_^;; we left off before the decision is made.)

...

*bounces crowbar threateningly and flicks lighter*

He DID do it anyway, didn't he! *glares more threateningly, then smiles eerily bright*

aiyokusama July 5 2008, 14:29:17 UTC

You're a cruel, cruel woman ^_^;;