ONESHOT | Lost
Lost
pg-13 | angst | oneshot
aitakutemo for sacchlovedbsk
smells like raining. -or was it you. crying?
( lost )
pg-13 | angst | oneshot
aitakutemo for sacchlovedbsk
smells like raining. -or was it you. crying?
( lost )
Comments 4
this; your grasp is weakening. is. weaken. ing. oh fuck. you can literally feel like you're in yunho's/jaejoong's place (i'm sorry i couldn't really follow exactly what was going on but DON'T EXPLAIN TO ME BECAUSE I LOVE IT WHEN IT'S VAGUE LIKE THAT I CAN JUST LIKE, PONDER ABOUT IT FOR A LONG ASS TIME) because in your head you have to say it as well (at least i do) and it's like your choking on your own words & fuck fuck fuck ;~; ilu and i love this fic. and i want, more. a lot more. ;=;
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your comment makes me feel like. LKADHLAKDHASD. idk. SMILE SO WIDE THAT MY CHEEKS HURT. :')
it's like your choking on your own words.
you describe the feeling so well. ugh, idk. ever since forever i've been wanting to write something like this, and now that i managed to finish one, knowing people like it feels so URGH.
♥ /CRIES IN HAPPINESS
next? this one's a total angst. D: but yeah here it goes.
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from how you cut the sentences and the constant repition, I get this feel that whoever that's speaking isn't quite...okay? Dies okay at this point idek if it's Jaejoong or Yunho yet but
because they just covered the hole
Oh no. Oh nooo snap no you didn't, did you? aksjdna
And again with the dictionary definition, sigh I love how it's the most important words you're breaking down.
I think in the end, it's the last conversation part that packs the punch. Maybe it's because of the current situation and the...pity? Yeah. And the fact that they're just a vague memory now, nevermind the fact that they're real people as well.
dies I feel like an utter bitch for this but maybe check over some of the lines again? Just a few typos~
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