*grin* Thank you. I knew I was going to have very little time, so I think my brain was working on it when it shouldn't have been. Given the circumstances, I'm pleased with how it turned out.
:) I'm glad you like it. I have an idea of who it's dedicated to, but when I finished it I realized it could be the opposite of who I imagined, and it could be others as well. I'm not usually a fan of ambiguity in poetry, but in this case I like the questions it raises. Thank you for commenting. :)
Wonderful message here. It really makes ya think! I particularly like the imagery of you / the girl with the braids and mass of pink barrettes. Nice job! P.
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Very nicely done!
Good luck!
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Thank you for reading and commenting. :)
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