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aisling87

Brigits Flame Week 4

Oct 31, 2008 00:57

It’s quiet now.

The plush carpet is worn beneath my shoes. Not long ago it was host to hundreds of pairs of feet - shuffling and stomping feet, running and dancing feet-but it’s quiet now.

I close my eyes and conjure ghosts of memories to fill the empty seats. I try my best to animate them - to imagine the baptismal waterfall of their applause ( Read more... )

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cedarwolfsinger October 31 2008, 21:28:09 UTC

This is AWESOME. Really bittersweet and melancholy. So well done. I like it LOTS. Good luck!

aisling87 November 7 2008, 21:27:32 UTC

:D Thank you! (Sorry it took so long to reply). Good luck with NaNoWriMo this month!

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aisling87 November 7 2008, 21:27:56 UTC

:) Thank you very much. I'm very glad you liked it.

Editor 2 amri November 1 2008, 17:34:46 UTC

Hi-

I'm one of your editors this week.

This piece was amazing! I loved the visuals that you paint with your words. The wording was melodic just like the imaginary orchestra the speaker was directing.

You gave just enough detail to leave the readers (like me!) wanting more.

Great job and good luck this week!

Re: Editor 2 aisling87 November 7 2008, 21:28:31 UTC

Thank you very much for your complements and your time editing. It is much appreciated :)

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aisling87 November 7 2008, 21:29:06 UTC

:) Thank you very much! I'm very glad that you enjoyed it (sorry it took so long to reply).

desert_rose November 9 2008, 08:30:06 UTC

Hi there, I'm your editor for this entry- sorry I'm so late getting to it ( ... )