omg i'm bawling right now with my eyes swollen & puffy ; ; i like how you switch the past and present in every paragraph like that and i love their relationships ... it's beautiful ; ;
I'm happy you liked the alternating timeline. I was afraid that people would get confused. Their friendship their...I really like it, too, so I'm happy you noticed that.
I'll think of a TaoHun fic. I hope I get to write it soon. :D
beautiful story :') really sad when Luhan died.. the reunion scene was really sad, The gang never really got over Luhan and the past cause they never really had the closure.. at the reunion, then only they talked about it.. Oh God, beautiful story, mem-ing!
Luhan is so full of life here that his death is really depressing. :(
The reunion scene was emotional for me to write. They've been apart all those years, all still mourning, and just now, finally, they're getting their closure. Luhan brought them back together again.
I'm happy you liked this. Thank you for reading! :)
(“I’d like to believe that we’re not stupid,” Sehun gently corrects him, “only reckless. And a bit brave, too.” “That makes it even worse,” Luhan says, eyes sad, “Because that would mean that we actually know what we’re doing.”)
this reminds me of looking for alaska, with lu han as alaska - brilliant, reckless and spirited, but kind of stuck in a dream - and sehun as pudge - desperately in love but not quite fully /understanding/
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i like how you switch the past and present in every paragraph like that
and i love their relationships ... it's beautiful ; ;
taohunnnnn ♡♡♡♡
please write more of taohun ok !? ; v ;
thank you so much ¬
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I'm happy you liked the alternating timeline. I was afraid that people would get confused. Their friendship their...I really like it, too, so I'm happy you noticed that.
I'll think of a TaoHun fic. I hope I get to write it soon. :D
Thank you for reading! :)
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the reunion scene was really sad, The gang never really got over Luhan and the past cause they never really had the closure.. at the reunion, then only they talked about it..
Oh God, beautiful story, mem-ing!
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The reunion scene was emotional for me to write. They've been apart all those years, all still mourning, and just now, finally, they're getting their closure. Luhan brought them back together again.
I'm happy you liked this. Thank you for reading! :)
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“That makes it even worse,” Luhan says, eyes sad, “Because that would mean that we actually know what we’re doing.”)
this reminds me of looking for alaska, with lu han as alaska - brilliant, reckless and spirited, but kind of stuck in a dream - and sehun as pudge - desperately in love but not quite fully /understanding/
(“You should go,” Luhan finally says.)
;~~~~~~~;
ok my heart broke at the end
but
i guess sehun can't just dwell on lu han forever
so good for him
:'c
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Sehun has to move on. There's nothing more he could do about Luhan. But Zitao is there. :D
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I can't even write what I'm feeling.
Great.
Bye .
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Thank you for reading, though! :D
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