[PG-13] Broken Heartbeats [EXO] (1/1)

[airplanewishes]

Title: Broken Heartbeats
Author: airplanewishesFandom: EXO

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[scrapedheart]

IDK WHAT TO SAY BECAUSE YOU MADE LUHAN INTO THIS DEMONIC CREATURE THAT BREAKS PEOPLE'S HEART AND THEN I WANT TO CUDDLE SEHUN BUT THEN I STILL LOVE LUHAN. IDK WHAT TO DO OMFG YOU MADE ME INTO THIS MESS I CAN'T.

“I don’t care,” Jongin muttered as he pulled away and kissed him on the forehead. “I’ll see you later. Okay?” He stared at him intently.
FUCKING DATE NOW OKAY /hides

Sehun frowned. “Hey, what makes you think I’m the girl in this relationship? Luhan is pretty enough to be a girl.”

“But you’re prettier,” Jongin told him with a wink.
mhm flirt more

“Because,” Luhan shrugged, “What’s important to me is now, the present. I want to be here and enjoy what I have. Instead of wondering what would happen, I do my best to make the things I want happen right now.” He scooted closer to him. “Like you, like us, I make sure that this,” he leaned towards him and gave him a kiss, “happens more often.”
Bitch you don't just say such sweet stuff AND THEN CRUSH MY POOR SEHUNNIE'S HEART THE NEXT SECOND PUTAAAAAAA

“Luhan’s missing,” Sehun

[airplanewishes]

Like what I said before, I think I took Luhan being the evil incarnate too far. Hehe! Anyway, I think, Sehun wouldn't mind the cuddling.

I think...unintentionally I made Sehun and Kai have something. But really this kind of friendship is something that I always look for in friends and I have to say that I have very few of this kind of friends (minus the flirting).

I'm sorry to have made you cry, but yeah I wanted to stab Luhan in the end. Sehun never deserved any of that. He should just run to Jongin and kiss him or something. LOL.

This is Luhan as a whore to the extreme level.

Your comment is giants of awesome, thank you. Sweetiepie. :)

[penipenpen]

YOUR LUHAN HERE REMINDS ME OF SOMEONE.
*coughRENAcough*

[scrapedheart]

can I slap you pretty pretty please?

[airplanewishes]

/slaps you both just for good measure

[penipenpen]

/real comment goes here.

YOU BROKE MY HEART WHEN LUHAN BROKE SEHUN'S. IDE /wails Luhan is such a jerk. How can he broke Baek's heart, then Sehun's and for sure Yixing's too. DDD:

But SeKai doesn't hurt so YAY.

[re_lla]

“But you’re prettier,” Jongin told him with a wink.
*nodding in agreement*
yep yep i could't agree more ; v ;
awww jongin ... you too kind & so nice to be true ...
if i can have a generous friend like him ... i don't want anything else ; _ ;
i don't understand why sehunnie doesn't see this ... or it because of their 'friend-zone' ?
... love is blind huh ? ... /sigh/
luhan ... you son of a bitch ... = = no ... actually you are a bitch yourself you jerk !
thank you very much jongin for those nice punch :DD give him a good lesson !
it's good that at least baekhyun had chanyeol & sehun had jongin
but kyungsoo ... ;-; .... my poor cutie pie ... /sobs/

thank you ! ;w;

[airplanewishes]

All of Exo is pretty. Seriously. Where did they even find these boys? 12!

Jongin's friendship is the kind that I want to have with a guy, like someone who'll really take care of you and look after you unconditionally. Sehun doesn't see this because he's used to it. Sometimes we take for granted things/people that are always with us, always around us. I don't think he means to do it. It's just that he knows that Jongin is there and always will be.

And Luhan... I feel bad for writing him like this, but yeah, he is a jerk.

Sehun has Jongin. But Jongin... who does he have? :(

Kyungsoo is a cute single boy. :))

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D

[snowychrys]

So I'm here really, really late and I'm sorry ;w;

But again, this is a great piece from you, Frances dear. The friendship between Jongin and Sehun... I truly envy it (though I would root for Jongin to go for Sehun. He seems to be in love with Sehun yet not saying anything about it. That idiot, let me give him a kick in the arse to give him some sense). It's sad that Sehun lost Kyungsoo because of the sea, and it doesn't help that Luhan had to feign his death in the same manner, which only made Sehun all the more heartbroken and afraid of the sea.

But towards the end of the story... Can I just say I'd like to strangle Luhan? Oh my god I can't believe he actually used such a low-handed method to break up with Sehun, after trying to get him into bed countless times. I just.. I fully stand by Jongin's actions. Maybe he should have punched Luhan's face in even more. Yeah, that would certainly do more justice for the hurt he had caused to Sehun.

Let me shower you with love♥ for all this SeKai goodness! Huhuhuhuhu

[airplanewishes]

The SeHan fic ended up to be a SeKai one. LOL.

I want a friendship like theirs, too. I think not everyone has that. It's something so precious and so beautiful that I envy it, too.

I took Luhan's evilness to a whole new level here. Haha! I really wanted to stab him for being such an a**hole and just hurting Sehun the way he did.

And yeah, Jongin was in love with Sehun, quietly. Coz how can he compete with Luhan? Sehun only saw him.

Thank you for reading and commenting! And don't worry about being late. /huggles you

[2w3theyunjae]

WTF. WTF! WTF?! WHAT THE FLYING FUCK?!?!?!

THIS MOTHER FUCKING BASTARD OF A LUHAN.

FORGIVE ME FOR SUCH FOUL LANGUAGE BUT THIS ISN'T EVEN THE MOST PART OF MY RAGE.

I hate Luhan in this fic. Omg. I want to strangle him to death. Then skin him. Then chop every shingle organ in his body. Then I'll crack his bones one by one. I WANT TO HURT SOMEONE RIGHT NOW.

SOMEONE STOP ME BEFOR----*punches wall*

++,

Thank you for this fic, though. XD I liked it no matter how angry I am right now, lol.

[2w3theyunjae]

single*

[airplanewishes]

I...am sorry? /hugs you
But yeah, he was a douchebag and such an ass to Sehun and to everyone in general.
/stops you and hugs you
Thank you for reading!!