Title: Los Gatos (Chapter 1) Fandom: Football RPS Pairing: Villa/Silva (eventual, not in this part), others Rating: PG Disclaimer: I certainly don't claim any of that has ever happened.
Omg, this was so good! Really, really good. Poor David. It would be funny how he just keeps bringing all the misfortunes on himself, it it weren't so sad. I can relate to some of the things like losing the passport or losing my way in the city, but I can never imagine what would it mean to be in David's situation. But you made me love the boy with all his awkwardness and sweetness. It's also amazing how you made the other characters so interesting and fun to read. Especially loved the little cameo from Fernando and Olalla. Looking forward for more. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Thank you :) It's my first footie fic ever, I was so nervous to post it. I'm so glad you like it. Yeah, he's a bit of a bad luck magnet. Passport, losing your way, getting on the wrong train, happens to everyone - sometimes, for him, it's a regular thing XD I guess those who know him are kind of used to it. I'm so happy I managed to make the characters interesting, considering there are so many others to appear.
What an intriguing start. Poor David, you can't help but feel for him. And I loved all the Man City mentions-Joe, Kun, the shirt colors-nice touch. Looking forward to more :)
Intriguing as in disastrous for David? ;) Yes, he's quite miserable now and personally I think he's still doing considerably well as he hasn't had a complete breakdown yet. I'm glad you liked them, I didn't want to be overly insulting to their shirts colour, though XD There will be more, I hope soon :)
Thank you. Characterisation is really important to me and I always spend ages trying to come up with everyone's personal traits, so it means a lot that you liked it :) (yay, plus yay again that my name is recognizable Irish - I love Ireland but I haven't had the chance to study the language)
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But you made me love the boy with all his awkwardness and sweetness. It's also amazing how you made the other characters so interesting and fun to read. Especially loved the little cameo from Fernando and Olalla.
Looking forward for more. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Yeah, he's a bit of a bad luck magnet. Passport, losing your way, getting on the wrong train, happens to everyone - sometimes, for him, it's a regular thing XD I guess those who know him are kind of used to it.
I'm so happy I managed to make the characters interesting, considering there are so many others to appear.
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Looking forward to more :)
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I'm glad you liked them, I didn't want to be overly insulting to their shirts colour, though XD
There will be more, I hope soon :)
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(ps yay irish language user names)
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