Pairing: neo
Rating: pg
Wordcount: 5,294
Warnings: None
Summary: Sometimes it gets harder to drown out life.
Notes: Companion fic to
reticent. It doesn't need to be read in order to understand this one but it might be helpful.
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Taekwoon can disappear when he wants to. )
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He's trapped in his own skin, cramped and burning and electrocuted and freezing. His body shakes but he can't move and his head is pounding, eyes so sensitive. He feels like his blood is thrumming in his veins, rushing in waves and sending his body into high alert. Taekwoon feels like he wants, needs, to shed his skin, like a snake. He wants to crawl out as a new person. His fingers tremble weakly. He can't make a fist.
It's so poetic and I thought i would just burst from the inside out like Taekwoon felt!
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i have a few more parts for quiet verse planned and after i'm not so busy with school i'll be able to write more because this verse really means a lot to me. thank you for liking this verse!!
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today i have a kind of a bad day and i needed to read it again as some parts of this verse, of this taekwoon - it really resembles of how i feel
and i love your writing it's so pretty i'm ;;
i just hope you'll write and show us another part of this verse sometime in the future
it's beautiful and thank you for this ◡‿◡
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thank you for reading! i'm glad this story could help you in some way, even if it was small ;~~; there will definitely be more parts coming up very soon!
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good luck!!
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This is fantastic. So, so great, so emotional, and ugh. You almost managed to make me cry at the scene before the bathroom. Kudos!
I read the first fic, and then went straight to this. And, fucking hell, I love the bath tub. When he hid away there in the first part, it hurt me, and it feels like someone squeezing my heart every time I read it. It's just... so powerful, and it makes me want to hold him in my arms and soothe him, which is ironic, when it's something he wouldn't like; rather, it'd probably make it worse, pfft. But ugh, precious Taekwoon
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every comment i receive means so much to me but comments like these touch my heart so deeply ;; i'm glad that this little fic of mine could make an impact on you, no matter how small ;u;
i hope you won't feel sad just because taekwoon is asexual though! he and hakyeon care for each other very much and his asexuality is not a hindrance to that at all! he just doesn't need hakyeon in the way that most people may think, but he still needs hakyeon all the same and hakyeon understands that!!
thank you so much for reading (;*△*;) now that nano's over, i'm going to be writing more of this series this month and i plan to have another fic up by christmas!
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I'm glad you're glad <3 Huuuge impact!
Ah, no. I've been reading more about it lately, what with all these fics with Taekwoon as asexual, and I'm starting to realise there's a difference between aromantic and asexual and whatnot XDD So, I'm perfectly fine <33 After all, it's their relationship, their connection and understanding of each other, that's important <3
Wheeeeeeee! Can't wait <33
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