Shine 01./01. // One-shot // SHINee // OT5, Jinki-centric

May 22, 2011 10:11


shine
jinki-centric / jinki/everyone / ot5
pg, band!fic, fluff, friendship
word count: 3,090
beta: kaykm Thank you so much, my dear <3

a/n. This is probably not the fic that my flist is waiting for. Sorrrryyy, or actually not. This is the first fic in MONTHS that I was able to finish. Who am I to say no to inspiration when it comes crawling back to me? even ( Read more... )

raiting: pg, length: one-shot, genre: fluff, shinee, genre: drama

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yaoiokami May 22 2011, 09:00:13 UTC
I think you did so wonderful for your first fandom fic! I planned to give it a once over (cause it's 4AM here and I need to do things later today) but once I read the opening paragraph I couldn't stop... :D

I don't regret it one bit.

I love how you went through and described his attempts to cheer the other boys up, even going into their habit changes when they weren't feeling up to par. All in all though, I thought Jinki's way of comforting Jjong was the sweetest. (and hell I'd be scared of Minho too if he got like that when he was mad D:)

Thanks so much for writing and sharing this wonderful piece! Now I'm off to bed with happy thoughts~~ :D

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nana_lytama May 23 2011, 07:03:20 UTC
Oh thank you so much for this lovely comment, it always makes me nervous to post the first fic to a fandom but I'm glad I did:)

I would be scared of Minho, too. But I think the guy has some natural aggressiveness in him. In a good sense, of course:-p

Thank you so much, I hope you had a good rest after reading:))

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ontaejongminkey May 22 2011, 09:01:01 UTC
First fic? D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ;~;

SO GORGEOUS!<333333

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nana_lytama May 23 2011, 07:03:52 UTC
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! <33333333333333333333

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ontaejongminkey May 23 2011, 07:24:48 UTC
No problem :3 I enjoyed this very much^^b

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scarredknees May 22 2011, 09:17:25 UTC
THIS IS SO AMAZING you write them so incredibly well <3
i love how i really got the emotions, and it just ended so well. <3333 idek how to describe omg. <333 it just made me SO SO SO happy it's ridiculous. :')))

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nana_lytama May 23 2011, 07:04:44 UTC
Awwww thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it that much:))) ♥

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lunathunderhead May 22 2011, 10:10:16 UTC
This is about seventeen different kinds of brilliant. I love it.

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nana_lytama May 23 2011, 07:05:14 UTC
You made me happy now. So much. Thank you:)

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yumiko_okahawa May 22 2011, 10:38:36 UTC
I nearly died, when I got an e-mail notification that you updated. I squealed and rushed over to read ------ and found that it wasn't amber T____T
But that's okay, actually it's not, but in a way, it still is ;)

I have no idea of this fandom, I heard that band exists, but I never heard their names, never saw their faces and never listened to their music.
It was still a nice read :)
It didn't matter I don't know them, when I read this. They kind of just were a bunch of guys who are friends, who have their differences and times when they can't stand each other, but in the end, they remain being friends.

So, I really enjoyed this as a small distraction from working on my photos and texts and trying to think of something productive, because I knew it was well-written, so fandom doesn't really matter :)

*snuggles*
Still, I have to nudge you and promise you my soul and first born for another update of amber.
I'll probably keep the bribe of my first born for another time, though... and just offer you my soul for now XD

Love you ♥

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nana_lytama May 23 2011, 07:12:51 UTC
I never ever thought I would see you here, my love.
Haha, awwwwwwwwwwww thank you so much for reading this. I know it's not the same when you don't know the characters and I can't really do it so I absolutely adore you:)

I'm so happy you could enjoy it though. ♥

*cuddles* I know, I know!
This week was a chaos. I wrote this ic two weeks ago, tbh. Now I didn't even have the time to do the laundry:(( I'm trying my best to update, dear.

...and I would take your soul but it sounds so cruel not to mention your first born, hehe. I just continue loving you ♥

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