A friend of mine did a fanvid and then wrote up this giant "Director's Commentary" thing for it that I enjoyed a whole lot, and so I decided I would try that for this story, which aaaaaaaaaaaate my braaaaaaaaaaaaaain. So if you're bored or secretly care about what goes on inside my pseudonymous head or whatever, you can enjoy reading this! I had
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Haha, *pets you*
People online who do trading are always cloning Pokemon. Why wouldn't someone try to do that in the in-game universe? If pokemon are transmitted digitally as information, that means they can be copied; no one in this universe seems to be worried about encryption, could you really just tap the wire and get Arceus out?
This is cool.
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Anyways, I love that you wrote this all out. I love watching people's thought process when it comes to stories, and since this also includes your impressions of my story, it was like... double the enjoyment, I suppose would be the best way to phrase this. I'm still not sure who the Hiker is, but now that I know what he was trying to do...a sdfghjkl; that is very, very awesome.
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Oh! I forgot to mention this, but I decided to try the present tense only because you did the whole thing that way and it flowed so cleanly; I use it very rarely but I think it can work really well in this kind of story. You're better at it than me but I think I mostly managed!
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