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carlospotter February 25 2012, 17:57:20 UTC
This is so lovely! x

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aimmyarrowshigh February 26 2012, 19:29:49 UTC
Thank you so much!

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k_sewell1d February 25 2012, 19:33:19 UTC
this is so pretty. perfect combination of being funny and cute and angsty and sad. it was just really lovely.

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aimmyarrowshigh February 26 2012, 19:29:55 UTC
Thank you so much!

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aimmyarrowshigh February 26 2012, 19:30:02 UTC
Thank you so much! :)

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igrab February 26 2012, 23:01:57 UTC
NO WAIT WHAT WHY DID IT STOP.

WHAT.

THIS IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL THING I'VE EVER READ, V BABY. I'M SERIOUS. IT GIVES ME THE WEIRDEST SORTS OF FEELINGS AND I'M SWIMMING IN MY HEAD AND I CAN FEEL THESE WORDS IN MY MOUTH AND THAT'S NOT THE END.

IT ISN'T.

MAKE IT BETTER THO. OR I'M GOING TO CONTINUE IT. AND FAIL MISERABLY COS I CAN'T WRITE LIKE YOU.

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aimmyarrowshigh February 29 2012, 06:25:55 UTC
:33 Thank you, dollface! I will not be continuing it, 99% likely, since I never write continuations of anything, really, so if you'd like to, you certainly may!

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cassiehayes February 28 2012, 17:28:30 UTC
eeeeeeeeeeeeeee, this is ridiculously lovely and angsty at the same time, how, I love it. Louis being curious about Harry, and kissing him to show him how, and, god, this:

After they walked the girls home, Harry pulled Louis into an alley between streets and kissed him until he was smiling again.

Like, it just comes across as such a normal, NATURAL thing, just how they work, and then to have it followed right after by them realizing not everyone works like that, the whole idea of growing out of them is kinda heartbreaking.

Favourite favourite favourite part though is probably Harry not even realizing when he started referring to Louis as his boyfriend. UGH, THESE BOYS.

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aimmyarrowshigh February 29 2012, 06:26:22 UTC
Yay! Thank you so much; I'm glad you liked it! And I'm glad that you think I balanced the angst and not-angst well. :)

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