this was beautiful and expressive. your words, descriptions and analogies of the boys were ones of poetry, pure, liquid like gold that smoothed right off the screen and into my brain. i was enthralled and a little taken a back of the amount of power in this short piece. i encourage you to please write more for this fandom. you're quite amazing.
Oh, this is beautiful. I absolutely love this insight into Liam's mind. The picture with the boys orbitting each other all in different ways that you drew was absolutely lovely. *happy sigh* It's bittersweet that Harry seems not to fit into the space Liam has open for him, but you manage to make it sound not entirely that bad.
Anyway, I adore this. I hope to see more from you! :D
This is probably the weirdest, most amazing 1D one-shot I’ve ever read. Omg. I’ll never see Harry the same way again. I got this weird image of Harry being the sun, bright and burning and independant and beautiful, and the boys being like the planets surrounding him, depending on one another, in synthony, which I guess was the idea of the fic. Either that or I have too much imagination
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Anyway, I adore this. I hope to see more from you! :D
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