Fic: Grace Period [Inception]

Aug 09, 2010 00:26

Title: Grace Period
Character/Pairings: Arthur/Eames, Ariadne, Cobb, Saito 
Rating: PG -13 
Disclaimer: Mr. Nolan owns it all
Warnings:  Um...much rambling...
Summary: Arthur, Eames thinks, has always been a creature of extraordinary grace. So really, it comes as no surprise that he's also mesmerizingly agile and elegant when falling out of a ( Read more... )

fic: inception, hc_bingo, pairing: arthur/eames

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strzyga August 9 2010, 04:58:51 UTC
oh, this is beautiful. i love how you introduced the plotline-- beginning with how graceful arthur is, even when falling out of a helicopter, and then slipping into the action that leads to it. this is fantastic all around ♥♥ it all felt very real to me. :)

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aimlesstravels August 10 2010, 03:13:46 UTC
Thank you, dear!
I wasn't sure if the framing would work, but I'm glad you liked! :)

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archerstar August 9 2010, 05:09:48 UTC
I'd call that a ridiculously successful attempt, although damn, I was all 'NO WHAT THE HELL, HE'D BETTER NOT BE DEAD' when Arthur went flying out of the helicopter. There was almost rending of the clothing. It was not cool. BUT HE LIVED TO SNARK ANOTHER DAY.

I wouldn't worry at all about OOC. You've got their voices down perfectly. I could hear them saying the lines the whole time.

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aimlesstravels August 10 2010, 03:14:48 UTC
Rending of the clothing? O__O
Um. Then I wouldn't recommend reading the fics where I do indeed kill Arthur off... ;)
Thank you for your kind reassurance and for reading. I'm glad you liked it!

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niftywithan August 9 2010, 05:11:30 UTC
*wibble* HOW DO YOU WRITE SO PRETTY, BB. I swear, if I wanted to quote all the passages I absolutely loved, we'd be here all night.

But seriously. GUH. You KILL me with these fics! I absolutely adored this one. I love the way you write all of these characters, and I really enjoy the little snippets that show their history, especially with the relationship between Cobb, Mal, and Arthur.

Really, really well done. Keep up the glorious work!! :D

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aimlesstravels August 10 2010, 03:17:22 UTC
*smishes* Oh, bb. You have no idea how much I adore *your* fics; they're the perfect antidote to the little black cloud of angst hanging over my head.
Shall I tease with some more snippets in future fics? ;)
♥ Thank you for dropping a review! *hugs*

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niftywithan August 10 2010, 05:19:44 UTC
YES. PLEASE TEASE ME WITH SNIPPETS. I LOVE THEM. \o/

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kitsu84 August 9 2010, 05:24:00 UTC
This is superb, bb. So wonderfully written, and remarkably in-character. ♥

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aimlesstravels August 10 2010, 03:15:14 UTC

Many thanks, bb!! *hugs*

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paperthin_sin August 9 2010, 05:38:28 UTC
ahh! so fabulous. actual!disaster <3 i need more, ahhh :D <3 j'adore~

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aimlesstravels August 10 2010, 03:15:48 UTC
Thank you!!
More? Hmm...let's see what else my mind can cook up. ;)
Glad you enjoyed!

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