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Sep 21, 2007 22:50

Wangst isn't over yet, I'm afraid.
The Ballard of Zephyr Stormchaser, part 26: Funeral )

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almosthonest September 21 2007, 23:05:58 UTC
He angsts! Wow, I think Carlsberg would feel intimidated in his presence. ;-) I didn't realise - through your game - that Saffron had died; I'm shocked! Good sacrifice though - easily a three-star.

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ailsa_chan September 22 2007, 08:44:48 UTC
I was hoping to have this far written by the time you met us with Zephyr and Amari again in game, so I wouldn't have to explain. But no one picked up on it.

More comments from you plz :)

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same_difference September 22 2007, 00:05:39 UTC
It's interesting to see where the characters end up.

Saffron began quite selfish, and ended up noble, but dead.

Amari went from distant, and different to being quite a cold and nasty character in many ways.

Zephyr has demonstrated himself to be a muppet, but not quite to the extent that it makes others sacrifices annoying because he doesn't appear worth saving. More it's annoying, because you feel like you're missing something about him; waiting for him to do something to prove the sacrifices made for his sake.

And Jack well Jack seems to exist.

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ailsa_chan September 22 2007, 08:52:57 UTC
I didn't intend Saffron to be selfish - she was supposed to come across as slutty and a bit of a tart until you understood more about her background and they way she thinks.

Amari's not so much cold, as very conservative with what she says and shows to others, in case they get the wrong impression. Where does the nasty bit come from, out of interest?

I don't know about you, but I've found that other people have a problem with Zephyr because they keep expecting him to be a hero. He's not. He's selfish adn irresponsible and has no real desire to get involved in anything much. But people still love him.

Jack was always going to be a more minor charecter. He's also about the only one that thinks that just because someone doesn't think the same way I do, doesn't mean they're wrong. So tends to cause less conflict.

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