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[ailsa_chan]

Second update of today. It seems getting a job makes me verbose.

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[same_difference]

"Had taken passage on a small, " I presume it should be "They had taken"

Also that's a very good way for a character to end, it doesn't feel like she was cheated at all, and she got to prove herself better than Amari too.

[ailsa_chan]

I feel really sorry for her. I felt really bad writing that bit. But it's what happened, so I can't change it (something I find hard to explain to people who don' write).