FIC: Drabbles, fourth batch

May 21, 2006 10:15



Thank you, moondagny, for betaing these. ♥

for _emeraldgreen
Sirius/James
"stupid competitions"
PG
271 words

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remeciel May 21 2006, 09:56:57 UTC
"Liar," retorted Remus. "You bought them for your own amusement over my reaction."

*loooool*
Favourite sentence in the whole batch. :) -- and I really enjoy the first one, too, though as you know it, I'm not in the J/S fandom....

I really love the way the drabble begins, teh way you describe Sirius is.... hot *gg*
And he's 13here. *shakes head*
Well done. ;D

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aillil May 21 2006, 10:58:27 UTC
Thinking isn't my strong suit today it seems...

Favourite sentence in the whole batch. :)

I knew you'd like that one. *g*

Ah, and J/S, well, it's not really for me, either, because it clashes horribly with R/S, but I can see Sirius and James do something like this.

I'm glad you liked them, my love, thank you.

*smashes article!*

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shaggydogstail May 21 2006, 12:12:58 UTC
Skin tight and smooth, the subtly shimmering, scaly material accentuated his narrow hips - and a lot more.

Now there's an image I think we can all treasure. Oh, yes.

"Have you ever kissed someone?"

He's rather obvious, isn't he? I really liked this, despite the fact that I officially dislike S/J (excpet for the part where I secretly do quite like it really). The whole boys splashing the brook thing was very cute.

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aillil May 21 2006, 12:33:26 UTC
Oh, yes.

Definitely! I was licking my lips when I wrote that. *G*

He's rather obvious, isn't he?

Well, he's 13 years old, what can you expect?

despite the fact that I officially dislike S/J (excpet for the part where I secretly do quite like it really)

Don't I know *that* dilemma... This is why I wrote this so I could get out of it again. They're 13, stupid, competitive like hell and bored.

Thank you for reading and commenting, dear. :)

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westwardlee May 21 2006, 12:36:48 UTC
I've died and gone straight to heaven! I read my drabble and literally died of a sudden, powerful attack of squee-ness. It couldn't be better, darling. They are just perfect.

I haven't even read the other ones, so you'll be getting another comment. I just couldn't wait one more second before thanking you profusely for the dead-on take on the two boys.

Can we borrow the bunny and use your drabble in one of the stories?

Mrs. Shacklebolt's name is Maura, but she's used to people calling her Maureen :-}

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aillil May 21 2006, 12:45:38 UTC
*revives you and returns to her state of being blown away by your comment*

Thank you so much! I'm incredibly glad you liked yours. It was very strange writing those two, because they practically belong to you and Ceria, and I felt very self-conscious about their ICness.

Can we borrow the bunny and use your drabble in one of the stories?

Why, YES! I'd be honoured. Please feel free to take anything and everything you want. *is delighted*

Yeeeks! Fixed it right away! So sorry.

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westwardlee May 21 2006, 12:41:24 UTC
The other two drabbles are excellent, too. Sirius is leather trousers is for everyone's amusement.

I loved the Sirius/James, too. It makes sense for two thirteen year-old boys to try something like that.

But I still love mine the best.

*hugs*

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aillil May 21 2006, 12:48:43 UTC
Thanks for reading the others too. *hearts* Somehow, I must admit, the plain leather trouser thing got a bit old somewhere -- even though there is nothing plain about Sirius in leather trousers, that's a cert --, but the dragon hide thing did give me a bit of a kick. *hides*

But I still love mine the best.

Heh, that's how it should be, shouldn't it? :)

*is off to read your newest installment of K/G*

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westwardlee May 21 2006, 23:05:00 UTC
Heh, that's how it should be, shouldn't it? :)
Definitely!

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ceria_taliesin May 21 2006, 12:58:32 UTC
*squees*

Lee just sent me over here.

This is beautiful! Wow. Lovely.

And the Remus/Sirius?
"Liar," retorted Remus. "You bought them for your own amusement over my reaction."
I love that.

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aillil May 21 2006, 13:03:09 UTC
Heh, so glad this worked for you, too. I was honestly quite anxious, because, well, those two really belong to you and Lee, I'm honoured she pimped this to you.

Thank you very much. :)

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