[fic] Just Don't Look Back, Chapter 20 - Yugioh, YamixYugi, angst/romance, R, AU

[aijou_aibou]

Title: Just Don't Look Back
Chapter: 20
Author: Chey (duelist_gurl163)
Rating: R
Genre: Angst/romance
Pairing: YamixYugi
Archive: Here
Overall warnings: AU, implied sex, insanity, violence
Spoilers: None.
Summary: Before he met Yugi, Yami spent his days panhandling alone. Yugi put his heart into

Comments

[animefanemiko]

Yay, an update! =D I feel so bad for Yugi in this chapter. ;_; And I tend to make male characters in my story very emotional, too. XD

[aijou_aibou]

Thanks! Yeah, making male characters too emotional is something I've really been trying to work on, but it's a tough habit to break. ^^;

[teef_sh]

First I read it, of course. Then I paged up praying that it hadn't been posted today. Alas I will wait for the next chapter with a quite dignity.

I love it. This is a great story. I like how you show the emotions of the characters. I just want to give Yugi a hug after reading this. Poor Yugi, it's all so much for him (you can do it Yugi! I'm rooting for you!)

Can't wait to read more. thanks a whole bunch for updating.

[aijou_aibou]

Thank you! It's quite a compliment to know you're looking forward so much to the next chapter. ^^

Thank you for the review!

[momduels]

Great chapter. I think I recognized some of your own emotions in this chapter so you did a good job on Yugi's emotions. I kept hoping that Yami was going to show up at the hospital to hold Yugi though. Keep up the good work!

[aijou_aibou]

Ahaha, yes. Therein lies the proof of just how old the rough draft of this fic is. ^^;

[bunnynumber13]

Reading this fic is like watching a train wreck... except in a strangely good way. I haven't been keeping up with it like I should but I'm glad to be all caught up now. Wow, seriously, one thing after another with these guys. If there's a happy ending in their future, I hope they get it because they deserve one.

[aijou_aibou]

I'm glad it's in a good way! xD If it was a train wreck in general, I'd be doing something very wrong.

Thank you for your comments and for taking the time to review each chapter. It really means a lot to me. =)