[fic] Just Don't Look Back, Chapter 14 - Yugioh, YamixYugi, angst/romance, R, AU

[aijou_aibou]

Title: Just Don't Look Back
Chapter: 14
Author: Chey (duelist_gurl163)
Rating: R
Genre: Angst/romance
Pairing: YamixYugi
Archive: Here
Overall warnings: AU, implied sex, insanity, violence
Spoilers: None.
Summary: Before he met Yugi, Yami spent his days panhandling alone. Yugi put his heart into changing Yami’s life, giving him

Comments

[bunnynumber13]

Hmm, kind of a meandering chapter, but still fairly interesting. It seems things are about to get hairy for our favorite couple. I just hope Yami tells Yugi about Shoua soon.

[aijou_aibou]

Thanks for the comment. ^^ I'm glad it was still kind of interesting -- I feel like this part of the fic is rather slow. =/

[strawberrykaoru]

Papa!Mutou is actually pretty decent. I like him. *__* (Is it wrong of me to think he was the most engaging character in this chapter? ^^U)

And guuuuuuuuuh the earthquake has impeccable timing. ;o;

Yeah, it feels like a slow chapter, but OH YES SHOUA. YOU HAVE COME BACK.

[duelist_gurl163]

Nah, I kind of liked him the most in this chapter too. xD He added something new besides Yami emoing and Yugi having anxiety attacks.

Slow chapters bother me. xD I can't wait till I start posting exciting ones again, I always feel they're more well-written.

[koishii_tenshii]

Just read through the entire story! I love the twists thus far. There's so many directions the story could take after that article. I can't wait to see them. Oh, And Shoua scares me. I wish I knew how he died and why it affects Yami so much. Hope we get to see that soon; I'm dying to find out.

Thanks for introducing me to this!

[duelist_gurl163]

Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it. =D It's going to go to around 26 chapters, so I hope that's good and long enough for you. ^^

[koishii_tenshii]

26 eh? I think that's definitely long enough for me! XD

[killyalatergatr]

It’s not like we’re famous, Yugi thought

Oh Yugi, you're so naive...

Keep on writing, Aijou/DG! :Db Your story is awesome.

[aijou_aibou]

Thank you, I shall!