Cape Cod is lovely.

[aiisling]

Author: Aiisling
Title: The Inherent Dangers of Pity and Love: A Plaude fic of 15th century Italy (Entry 9)
Pairing: Peter/Claude
Rating: R
Warnings/Spoilers: Still dealing with the rape, incest, blood

Summary: By the time the 1400's rolled about, Italy existed primarily as five major city states, one of them being Florence. This is a story about a

Comments

[gingerberrysnap]

Glad you had a good vacation. :)

Poor Pietro. :( I'm glad he was able to get out at least. Though he and Claude make quite the broken pair in the forest with Pietro recovering from his rape and Claude gushing blood.

Hopefully they'll manage to get somewhere safe, at least until Claude's wounds heal more.

I also especially loved the interlacing of Pietro's flashbacks within the narrative!

[aiisling]

"Glad you had a good vacation. :)"

Thanks ^_^ I got to eat a bug!

"Though he and Claude make quite the broken pair..."

*sigh* I know, it's all very melodramatic. But the damned plot bunnies are on an angst roll and they just won't let it go!

"I also especially loved the interlacing of Pietro's flashbacks within the narrative!"

They were fun to write (in an exploring new techniques sort of way).

[betterthanlegos]

The two of them shook with the force of his despair, turning the raw emotion into a kinetic energy that forced the air to heat.

Whoa. Intense.

This fic is just so..whoa. Keep up the good work :)

[to_special_hell]

Ooh. That was intense...
And sad. Instensly sad.

You are so good at describing things, like you have a perfect handle on details.

As he watched it detached itself and slowly floated downwards, changing shape as it fell to become a man.
I love that line, it's so feathery but still so heavy *-*

[aiisling]

"You are so good at describing things, like you have a perfect handle on details."

Thank you! I try and keep things together, and its nice to know that it works ^_^

[lotus0kid]

And so we leave our heroes lost in the woods, mostly naked, bleeding heavily, and emotionally traumatized. Boy, you're rough on your characters, you know that? They're definitely going to need some outside help now, since Pietro's in no condition to take care of Claude, or vice versa. Once again, very much looking forward to seeing how they work things out.

Cold sweat trickled unnoticed down his face as desires raced through his mind.
Ugh, man, Augustino too? Jeez, Pietro was just surrounded, wasn't he? Well, at least he's out of there, although... he flew, so does that mean Natanaele is a demone as well? Somehow, that makes him even worse.

[aiisling]

"Boy, you're rough on your characters, you know that?"

*sigh* yep. This fic has sort of run away with the melodrama-twistedness, but it can't be helped. Everyonce in a while I sit back, look at it and wonder how the hell it wound up here. AT the same time, it's sort of fun to let go and play on the darker side.

"Jeez, Pietro was just surrounded, wasn't he?"

Have you seen the show? EVERYONE wants him. *poor attempt to lighten up the severity of this page*

[lotus0kid]

it's sort of fun to let go and play on the darker side.
Oh yes, indeed it is. And you have to let the story take you where it wants to go, I just get antsy, is all..

EVERYONE wants him.
Oh yes, indeed they do! Fandom-wise, the poor guy gets passed around like a party favor, mainly because he has chemistry with the whole friggin' cast!

[aiisling]

"And you have to let the story take you where it wants to go, I just get antsy, is all.."

I totally get where you're coming from. Have you c_quinn's stuff? It's bad for the nerves but good for the "OH MY GOD do I need the next chapter!"

"Fandom-wise, the poor guy gets passed around like a party favor, mainly because he has chemistry with the whole friggin' cast!"

Hellz yeah! I wouldn't be surprised to see Molly/Peter fics! Disgusted, yes. Surprised, no. That boy bleeds sexual chemistry.

[c_quinn]

At this human, tender touch Pietro collapsed.

Wonderful line.

Excellent chapter.