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aiisling

This is a serious chapter.

Aug 01, 2007 01:33

Author: Aiisling
Title: The Inherent Dangers of Pity and Love: A Plaude fic of 15th century Italy (Entry 8)
Pairing: Peter/Claude
Rating: R
Warnings/Spoilers: Rape, Incest

Summary: By the time the 1400's rolled about, Italy existed primarily as five major city states, one of them being Florence. This is a story about a Prince of that esteemed and ( Read more... )

the inherent dangers of pity and love, plaude, fic

Comments 33

c_quinn August 1 2007, 16:07:27 UTC

Ack, Nathan: you pervy monster. Claude really should just kill him here.

And we will ignore how casual that statement is... ;)

Great work.

aiisling August 2 2007, 02:25:18 UTC

Thanks! Though I will admit to some feelings of hypocracy for being all 'ewwww Angela is gross!' and then writing THIS.

avaserenity August 1 2007, 16:27:57 UTC

Wow. I just read all the installments and I say again...WOW! Your Nathan is really dark and creepy and he just so violated the trust his brother had in him.

Poor Peter.

lotus0kid August 1 2007, 21:57:10 UTC

Oh jeez, Natanaele, it was worse than I thought, so much worse... Well, awesome chapter, of course. I like the juxtaposition of the beginning (Pietro and Claude's burgeoning relationship) with the end (Pietro and Natanaele's disentegrating one). I have to admit a bit of technical confusion, however. I thought Natanaele, Bishop Gabriel, and Augustino were at the villa. If that's right, why was Natanaele on the horse?

aiisling August 2 2007, 02:27:21 UTC

" I thought Natanaele, Bishop Gabriel, and Augustino were at the villa."

Nope! Well, Augustino is at the villa. But Bishop Gabriel and Natanaele were both at the Petrelli estate in the city when this chapter began. Sorry for the confusion!

If it helps, the two locations are connected by underground tunnels and passageways, with the dungeons located somewhere inbetween.

lotus0kid August 2 2007, 10:41:53 UTC

Ohhh, okay. Gotcha. Must've missed that bit somewhere along the way.

cucumber_k August 2 2007, 01:26:48 UTC

God, I'm still trying to recover from that. Of course you should be proud, it's very powerful.

Wonderful chapter.

aiisling August 12 2007, 02:47:33 UTC

Thanks! *hands cookie* to aid in your recovery, of course.

knightdawn August 2 2007, 05:00:03 UTC

FREAKING HELL!!!! that was the most amazing, most intense chapter ever!!!!

aiisling August 12 2007, 02:47:56 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad it had an impact.