Fic: Overcome adversity

[aidrocsid_eris]

Title: Overcome adversity
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[changminiminmin]

omg im first =)

[changminiminmin]

pshhhhhh that "hosu" tha leaves my poor minnie alone .. sequel sequel... =)

JAEMIN!!!!!!!! ( i even change the yoomin in my icon xD for the soulfighter)

[aidrocsid_eris]

Sequel? XDD But there's nothing left to write about!
Yes the hosu were not very nice D: but they helped bring about the jaemin ♥

[aidrocsid_eris]

Agh, some series this is, I've only done two XD; But thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D ♥

[mrsedjack]

NOO! >< I was supposed to be first! But then I couldn't stop myself from reading and - yeah. D:
Anyway, I'm come back and comment properly in a couple of.. hours? :/ <3

[mrsedjack]

I am so much in love with your Changmin. As if the real one wasn't enough, now I have this awkward smart-mouthed one as well. ><

I love the pace of the fic actually, I've been missing that for a while. And I love the fact that your fic, even though it's a one-shot, has a plot. <3

I could quote all the little parts I love, but... -sigh- There are just too many of them. I'd end up posting the longest comment ever. -.-'

Can't wait till you post another one - I think I'm addicted to these writings of yours. :D

[aidrocsid_eris]

I'm sorry to hear you didn't get first D: But, uh, I'm glad to hear that my fic was.. so distracting? XD;

:D Oh yay, I'm glad you liked the pace of the fic :)
I can't help but try and add some kind of plot to fics, because it makes it more interesting! Which is then why I can never write drabbles or anything really short u___u;
LOL, I'm glad you liked so many parts XD ♥
(I might be posting another ch fic soon? :D only yunho is evil in it and ajkdska. x__x;)

[mrsedjack]

Ah well. :D I'll be first on the next one, you just wait!
I just re-read this (for the 7th time or something) and realised - this part:

“-of all the places to meet up, and you pick a park-”
Does that have anything to do with Yoochun's last name? XD Because if it does, I feel stupid for only getting the joke now.

Oh, but don't worry about not being able to write drabbles. I can't write things with a plot. Usually it ends up becoming too long and complicated, and no one gets it. ><

You will? O.o Really? -excited- I love your updates. XD I shall sit here and await it now. (and I don't mind Yunho being evil. He's the most suitable one anyway) ♥♥

[thevirginia]

that was so adorable. i love how unsmooth min is XD: He doesn’t really ask so much as blurt it out, and Jaejoong gives him a confused look, like he’s the one acting weird. oh min, ♥

Does that mean,” he says slowly, “that I’ll have more friends than you?”
that amused me greatly. oh jae, you weirdo. i was almost scared you were going to break my heart with the appearance of teh chunz! he is quite squishy and irresistible ;_;

[aidrocsid_eris]

Min is horribly awkward and spazzy, I don't understand how he did it D:
And Jaejoong wasn't even supposed to say that. He was supposed to be serious and comforting, but he had to go and lighten the mood, and I was like. Huh. Well, okay, fine.

XDD I couldn't bear to break up the jaemin, even if Yoochun is far more smooth than Changmin >___> Jaejoong finds it endearing?

[x_voracity]

XDD~ jae's brain is a little too chaotic for the smooth that is chun. jaemin are so cute fjhdfjs *__*

[suna_sprite]

This is cute and realistic too. <3 Sometimes it's nice to read fast paces stories like this, though I wish it would continue ^^;

[aidrocsid_eris]

Oh, I'm glad you thought it was realistic :D Thank you ♥
I really did want to add another paragraph, but everything I thought of was really cheesy, so I figured it'd be better if I just stopped u__u; The result, a pretty abrupt ending D: