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aibakaneesh

Closer than Blood

Aug 07, 2012 19:24

Title: Closer than Blood
Pairing: Yewook
Genre: Fluff
Wordcount: ~3800
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Ryeowook’s father and Jongwoon’s mother get married, and everything would be peachy if not for the fact that Ryeowook has a secret crush on his new step-brother.
A/N: For kellsung

( Closer than Blood )

rating: pg-13, length: one-shot, super junior, fiction

Comments 27

dreaminginside August 7 2012, 23:26:24 UTC

marshmallowy spot

dreaminginside August 8 2012, 00:35:11 UTC

Awwww bb that was super cute!! :'D Ryeowook is a precious baby (marshmallow) who I want to cuddle and you're right omg Jongwoon is a dick his face was calling for a punch there you grown ass man you be nice to fluffy marshmallow Ryeowook. And jinmin is just a new otp ok and Sungmin is just kind of an instigating little bastard and I love it just plant the seed in Ryeowook's head and watch it grow into the gay that he knew would blossom. and i knew this would be a billion times better than the other!!! :"D <333 and i have quotes ok ok! :"D

Jongjin beamed at them and began talking a mile a minute about how he had called this and he was the next Nostradamus cries at nostrajin telling all the prophecies of the future XD

. His hero of a big brother was nothing but a rude, drunken prick. oh jongwoon there you go crushing ryeowook's dreams there to be a drunkard yes i am in the bg calling him a drunk XD Poor bb though Ryeowook probably just wanted to fit in all nice and peachy and then nope ;c

“But we need you,” he whispered. noooo sweet ( ... )

aibakaneesh August 8 2012, 00:45:56 UTC

I told you he was a dick!!! JINMIN OTP FOREVERRRRR. I SHIP IT LIKE FEDEX. and oh good. ;; good to know it's better bcos I refuse to look at the other. I think I'd just rage.

Nostrajin is my headcannon. He stands there and predicts everything, but no one listens to him. bcos he is dum

SHUT UP. JW IS A DRUNK. THAT'S ALL. NO NEED FOR YOU TO POINT IT OUT. OR TO TSK TSK WOOK. HE'S JUST LEARNING.

Jongwoon has to save some face. He can't just be totally nice, no, not when I've set him up to be a prick.

omg YOU. STOP IT. THEY JUST WANT PANCAKIES.

yes yes my panicked ending of IDK WHAT'S HAPPENING ANYMOREEEE. JINMIN 5EVRRRRRRR!!!!!
thank youuu and thank you for putting up with my while i wrote thisss. ;;

aibakaneesh August 7 2012, 23:34:34 UTC

Sport for Kellsung I tried but apparently I suck at commenting first on things I post myself. ;A; don't hate meee

kellsung August 8 2012, 00:16:44 UTC

OKAYITS 2:15 AM AND I HAVE WORK AND I HAVE TO WAKEUPAT 6 BUT OMG COLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEN;;;;;;; GONNA GET BACK HERE AFTER WORK ANDQUOTE THE SHIT OUT OF IT OMG ;A;

ITS PERFECT.

aibakaneesh August 8 2012, 00:38:06 UTC

I'M SORRY. MY INTERNET WENT NOPE. AND I WAS SITTING HERE LIKE DAMN WHERE IS EVERYONE AND THEN I LOOKED DOWN AND SAW IT HAD DISCONNECTED AND WHEN I GOT BACK YOU WERE GONE IM SORRYYYY

kellsung August 15 2012, 20:08:23 UTC

hfdhvsjfkvgb okay back omg why am i so late again. im sorry. i had a day off today so yay time i was doing nothing the whole day, and it felt so right ;;

anyway omg dont just go around telling ppl this fic was a gift for someone. say it proudly that you love me and out of love this fic was born. also. it is a little scary how much influence i have on you :"D i didnt even know you hated this theme so much? i mean, if i had known it was like your less favourite theme ever, id have been okay with you writing anything other for me ;;;

BUT. you did write it and i love you bcos it's perfect and sweet and beautiful and moving and hot. and let me just throw a bunch of quotes at you :"D

“Good. I don’t want some kid leaving his toys all over my room.”

Ryeowook turned around with a frown. “I’m seventeen. I’m not some child.”

“Could have fooled me, shrimp.” Jongwoon rolled onto his stomach and fished a magazine from between his wall and the mattress.I ACTUALLY SQUEALED OMG DID JONGWOON JUST CALLED RYEOWOOK SHRIMP OMG BRB DYINGGGGG ( ... )

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envybleedsgreen August 8 2012, 02:13:22 UTC

SPOT.

envybleedsgreen August 8 2012, 02:14:58 UTC

OKAY, THIS GAVE ME ALL SORTS OF FEELS. AND OMFG, THE ENDING WAS SO SHORT AND SWEET. AND EVERYTHING WAS NICE EXCEPT KIM JONGWOON WHY YOU NO LIKE KIM RYEOWOOK. but then they fell in love and all was good. :D

aibakaneesh August 8 2012, 04:33:47 UTC

LOL YOUR COMMENTS ALWAYS MAKE ME GIGGLE. Y U SO CUTE. LOL HE DOES LIKE KIM RYEOWOOK. HE'S JUST CONFUSED AND HEARTBROKEN OVER DADDY ISSUES.

shinnyluvssuju August 8 2012, 03:27:28 UTC

"Jongjin beamed at them and began talking a mile a minute about how he had called this and he was the next Nostradamus."
Lol that would be me XD

"I’m sure there are weirder situations out there.”
Lol, watch an episode of Jerry Springer XD

I loved this. This was really adorable.

Great job!

aibakaneesh August 8 2012, 04:32:48 UTC

Jongjin is my secret bias, ahead of all the sj members. He's so sassy. <3

LOL RIGHT? Exactly what I had in mind while writing, actually!

Thank you so much! For reading and commenting <3

soothingwords August 8 2012, 03:29:10 UTC

drunk!antisocial!jongwoon is the best ;~;
and I love incests ;~; even though they aren't blood related, they are "brothers" anyway
I just want to cuddle ryeowook and and ;~~;
and yeah, I loved this one!! T_T

aibakaneesh August 8 2012, 04:31:54 UTC

Oh gawd I know. Too bad we all know irl he can't hold his liquor for noodles. Poor bb.

I'm very iffy about incests. It took quite a lot of debating on my part to write this one, even if they weren't blood related. So I'm glad you like it and I'm glad I took the gamble!

Thank you for reading and leaving such a pretty comment. <3