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Aug 05, 2012 03:32

Title: Moonlight Shadows
Pairing: Yewook
Genre: Fluff, Angst
Wordcount: ~3000
Rating: PG-13
Summary: AU. It was fate that brought them together, but neither thought it would be over so quickly.
Warning: Character death.
A/N: Based on a song by the Italobrothers. Also Carrissa is awesome bc.

Moonlight Shadows )

rating: pg-13, length: one-shot, super junior, fiction

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dreaminginside August 5 2012, 07:35:27 UTC
BC I'M STILL AWESOME

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aibakaneesh August 5 2012, 19:21:19 UTC
yes bb u r. love u 5ever

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sunnysaph August 5 2012, 16:53:59 UTC
How in the fucking world do people write stuff like this?!? Its so freaking amazing and emotional i cant even figure out what else i should put. Awesome.

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aibakaneesh August 5 2012, 19:21:56 UTC
^__^;; I'm not too sure, to be honest. I just started writing and this is where it ended up. Thank you for reading!

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neverfade0611 August 5 2012, 19:14:28 UTC
Although I knew it was angst, I still got shocked when it actually came down to it! It was going on so splendidly in all its fluffy glory > < I really enjoyed reading all the cute moments, just wish it didn't end so sadly :(

But a great read nevertheless, you're amazing! ^^

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aibakaneesh August 5 2012, 19:22:45 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed those bits, at least. I'm sorry to end it so sadly, but I'm a bit of a sadist I guess XD

Thank you so much! <3

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anonsqueeze August 6 2012, 19:32:40 UTC
I am crying. For real.
Because of the awesomeness, because of the fluff, because of the death, everything.
I can't say any coherent thing right now. Just ... so beautiful and so sad ;~;
*goes after the robber and kills him*

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aibakaneesh August 6 2012, 19:39:05 UTC
. /shooshes you and pets your hair/

Thank you and D: I'm sorry for making you cry. ;; That wasn't my goal I promise. There will be happier things coming along shortly. Several people are forcing me to write happy fluff times after this XDDD;;

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anonsqueeze August 7 2012, 05:58:32 UTC
Don't worry about it, it's ok! I like to read some angst from time to time, like keeping the emotions balanced lol
I'm happy it had some fluff and then went to the angst, it makes it more able to read it with some smiles in between <3

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littlemiss_suju August 6 2012, 21:36:45 UTC
Okay, this has been open in a tab on my computer for hours and I couldn't quite bring myself to read it because it said angst and I knew it would rip my heart out but I decided to be brave and now I'm a sobbing, incoherent mess. fjwieoafjeafe 。゚(゚´Д`゚)゚。

This was beyond beautiful fejwiaofea ;~; Just everything. The counting and the memories and the fluff and everything ;~~~;

all in a dark, velvety voice that soothed Ryeowook’s nerves and sent his heart racing at the same time. HELLO this is so accurate oh my gosh

Ryeowook only smiles and tangles their fingers together. Jongwoon can feel that Ryeowook’s hand is trembling just as much as his own and he manages a small, sheepish smile. THIS IS LIKE THE CUTEST IMAGE oh gosh the two of them are the cutest and fluffies babies ;~~~;

The entirety of the last two paragraphs = perfection. So heart wrenching and filled with emotion and ugh actual tears ;A;

The cause of death was officially sucide, although Ryeowook had written broken heart. ACTUAL SOBBING MY BABY I CAN'T ;AAA;

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aibakaneesh August 6 2012, 21:46:41 UTC
;A; I'M SORRY. /snuggles you/

Ryeowook's opinions on Yesung are just mine tbh. ;;

Thank you. ;; Heartbreaking aside thank you for reading and commenting. I don't often write angst so this was a challenge. I'm glad it came across like..actually sad and not just..idk fake sad.

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littlemiss_suju August 6 2012, 21:55:44 UTC
IT'S OKAY (I secretly really love angst, especially when it rips my heart out, shhhhhh~)

(That's exactly how I write too, not going to lie. Whenever I need opinions on a certain member, I just casually insert my own in there, no big deal... >.> )

It was wonderful and definitely not fake-sad at all~~ <33

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