re: My Manuscript is in the Shop Again

[ahunter3]

I rewrote the section of my book where I (aka my "main character") meets the girl from the Massachusetts family that's vacationing out west, and falls in love. He takes her to a deserted overlook at the edge of a cliff and for a moment she thinks she may have put herself in a dangerous situation; the communications misfire leaves them shaken but

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[mallorys_camera]

You can definitely write!

And I think you are moving in the right direction here.