♥ Captivation wrote 'Lonely Boy and Fire Girl' for chinesebakery ♥

[jandjsalmon]

Title: Lonely Boy and Fire Girl
Author: Captivation
Summary: It’s a sad, boring house, and Tate is a lonely boy. Violet’s family is a joke, and she’s full of teenage fire.
Spoilers/Warning/Triggers: Cutting, sex, language? Yes, some language.
Author Notes: I don’t love the beginning, but at the end was literally a blast to write, so thanks for

Comments

[lolablaue]

“1994. I got completely fucked on coke, lit my mom’s boyfriend on fire, and shot 15 kids at Westfield. Do you want me to leave?” She must have been terrified. Tate tends to forget what’s acceptable to say in a conversation with someone you just met.

And... I'm dead. If we have an award again for best line in a fic, this should totally be it.

[lolablaue]

thank you, sweetheart, that means the world.

[anonymous]

I love that violet takes charge, the way she handles everything. Very good lines indeed, thank you dearly writing this amazing story!

[anonymous]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[chinesebakery]

YAY! There's a lot to love in this story but I especially loved the cutting scene, so gorgeous and emotional!

Violet wails. The house reaches out slowly, extinguishing her sparks, one by one. <--- This.

Also, the way you describe Tate following Vi around just for the sake of it. And our fearless Violet just accepting the whole ghost thing without so much as a blink. And of course the sex, these two are so hot together. Thank you!!!

[chinesebakery]

i'm SO SO glad you liked it, and the cutting scene is one of my favorites also. Violet is my fierce baby, always so strong. Again, i'm glad you enjoyed!

[aaronlisa]

I like this Violet a lot more than canon Violet.

Overall I just loved your story. Great work!

[jandjsalmon]

Oh my word I loved this so much! His loneliness was almost palpable. The cutting scene reduced me to tears. Really REALLY wonderful!