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♥ thedevotchka wrote 'Coming Home' for ohyellowbird 2/2 ♥

Jul 21, 2012 10:51

Title: Coming Home
Author: thedevotchka
Summary: Tate Langdon shot up his high school in 1994 and walked away from it. Now, he’s back to finish what he started.
Spoilers/Warnings/ Triggers: Violence, rape, graphic scenes.
Author’s Note: Thanks so much for giving me the opportunity to be a part of this exchange, it’s been the most challenging, but ( Read more... )

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jandjsalmon July 21 2012, 17:59:10 UTC

Oh my frick there is so much to comment on here. SO MUCH! The little details (like the rope out of her family's hair!) and just his tone when he's speaking to the first lady and the one from the bar... it's terrifying and super creepy - which is totally what you were trying to do but it's still freaky. LOL ( ... )

anonymous July 21 2012, 19:55:44 UTC

Disturbingly crazy amazing. I love this whole scenario. I like how much of a predator he is and just how insane he is. It was way awesome. All the stalking and the killing one by one was creepy perfection. It as like watching a serial killer movie from all the detail. Fantastc mystery person!

-GinHermi

anonymous July 21 2012, 20:30:11 UTC

This was bloody brilliant, I can't help but love psycho Tate. Even if he
Killed violet this was perfection.

HOLY FCKING SHITTTT sleepy_eyedd July 21 2012, 21:58:52 UTC

don't let the username fool you. ohyellowbird here. anyway.

THIS FUCKING FIC! I AM FOAMING AT THE MOUTH! it's so perfect, like soso painfully perfect. this is exactly the tate that i wanted. genuine bat shit insane tate langdon all grown up and dangerous AS FUCK!

i loved the feel of this entire fic. it was so creepy and ominous and tate reminded me so much of ted bundy (my favorite serial killer). he was so calm and unforgiving and UGHH his fixation on violet as developed SO WELL. i love that his MO was to go after girls that reminded him of the 90s. it was so well thought out and flippin' genius!

the rape scene was so hard to read but SO DAMN GOOD. i love how he misconstrued every sign, his mind so warped.

AND THAT FUCKING ENDING! i love me a sad ending and that one just wrapped up so neatly and wahhhh i'm sorry this is such an incoherent babbling. this is just so good. thank you mystery writer! you scratched an itch i've had forever. I LOVELOVELOVE YOU

aaronlisa July 21 2012, 23:22:22 UTC

This was creepy but in a good way. I think you really capture the darkness of Tate's character. Well done.