♥ ohyellowbird wrote 'Make War' for shootingstella 3/3 ♥

[jandjsalmon]

Title: Make War
Author: ohyellowbird
Summary: Dr. Violet Harmon's new patient is what you might call a game-changer. Or a psychopath. Both.
Spoilers/Warnings/ Triggers: Domestic abuse. Dub-con. Gore.
Author’s Note: Hey there! I hope you like this? It may stray from your prompt. A lot. But hopefully the fifteen thousand words will make up for that!

Comments

oh my god

[anonymous]

i can't even begin to express how much i loved this.
i can't.
every line was perfect.
you used the prompt perfectly and oh my god this is genius. my mouth was just gaping open the entire time at how good this is. holy crap. crazy, "my brother was just murdered" tate is my new favorite, and that hoodie oh GOD
whoever you are, i love you with all my heart.
-Cappy

[anonymous]

This was crazy genius! I love, love loved it. I thought it was really friggin creative and I absolutely adore how Violet flipped the switch and defended herself. And I felt like I was right there with her on the where is my mind I can't resist this guy even though he's trouble thing. Urgh. So good. <3

-GinHermi

I'd leave a comment, but i'm dead...

[shootingstella]

Because you killed me.

no. never mind. I'll comment anyway.

Oh my God what even was this!? like it fell from heaven and holy shit i can't deal with it.

The end of the first part wrapped up so neatly that if forgot there were two more pieces. so i pouted, and maybe wiped away a bittersweet tear or two because it was great but it was over.
and then i was like, MOTHERFUCKINGHOLIDAY! TWOMORECHAPTERS!
and each one was better than the last.

i loved the big scenes, with all the plot

and i loved the little scenes, when Tate get's hungry.

i loved all the blood because there's something wrong with me.

I love how many times he called her Dr. Fucking Harmon it made me scream

I loved every fucking thing about this story.

and you are a wonderful wonderful person who i love deeply.
If i ever have children, i'll name one after you.

[aaronlisa]

This was a really unique AU, I loved how you had Gabe be Violet's boyfriend. I also loved how you included other canon characters.

Great job!

[scarletwoman710]

"This is what falling down the rabbit hole looks like, sounds like, feels like.

“Wonderland,” she sighs, and it doesn’t make any sense at all, but Tate still pops his hips against her and whispers,

“Yeah, you are,” in a desperate rasp."

THAT FUCKING KILLED ME. Ugh. So good.