Thicker Than Water, 2/?

[ahoytheship]

Part 2, it would be best to read part 1 first...

An hour later, Mal leaned down at the head of the table and looked around at his assembled crew. Zoe sat stiff as a ramrod, Wash trying to take her hand in his, but she kept effectively yet gently brushing it off. The pilot’s face was unusually concerned, his smooth brow furrowed and lips turned down

Comments

[anonymous]

Wow, I totally love this!! Please please please continue!! And poor Wash getting all slapped around. Anyways, back to what I was saying: PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!!

Intriguing

[anonymous]

Hope there is more to come. That was a very un-Zoe-like bit of behavior and me-thinks there is good reason for that.

Wow.

[leven_kemal]

This is a very intriguing story-line. Very engaging and very well written. I see it's been a few months since you've posted part two, but I really hope you haven't lost interest!

Leven