Comments | ahliadra: BSG fic: Caged 'PG-13'

ahliadra

BSG fic: Caged 'PG-13'

Apr 17, 2008 18:57

Title: Caged
Author: ahliadra
Rating: PG maybe PG-13
Word Count: 2431
Setting: Resurrection Ship 1 and 2 with mentions of everything before
Author’s Note: Not my first BSG story (more like third-but second I've ever posted), yet the one I've been trying to write for a while now. I wanted a story with Helo and Tyrol and I wanted them talking ( Read more... )

writing, bsg, bsg fic, tyrol, sharon/helo

Comments 8

altorogue April 18 2008, 03:20:52 UTC

This was really well done. I love it when the relationship between Helo and Tyrol is explored a bit. I really liked Helo facing his fears, and the discussion of his background.

ahliadra April 27 2008, 05:37:46 UTC

Thank you for reading. I really loved the relationship of Helo and Tyrol and the way they came together. And I wanted Helo to have someone to talk to that wasn't Starbuck, someone he could relate to and who else but Chief for that?

Thanks again!!!

rebelliousrose April 21 2008, 16:16:31 UTC

Oh, terribly nice. I don't suppose you'd consider crossposting this at www.bsgkindreds.com? It's a Helo/Sharon community, and they'd all LOVE this as much as I do.

I adore writing Helo and Chief- so much between them here, but so little actually being said.

You do a great job capturing Helo's fear and confusion. And thank you for using the word "rape". A lot of writers shy away from it.

ahliadra April 27 2008, 05:48:42 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad I was able to get across how I felt Helo was feeling, and the Chief too. Both men share something in that they both love(d) Sharon. What they ran in on was horrific and now they have that in common too.

And as for using the word "rape", well it wasn't even a question. It's what I saw, it's what I saw Helo and the Chief see so I had to write it. I didn't want to sugarcoat anything.

Thank you once again!

sabaceanbabe April 21 2008, 16:45:57 UTC

It didn’t matter what she was, and it didn’t matter what she wasn’t.

That is EXACTLY how I see Helo's feelings for Sharon, as well. Thank you for sharing this. *hug*

ahliadra April 27 2008, 05:51:12 UTC

*hugs right back*

Thank you for reading!

You know, that's one of my favourite lines. I wanted to show that Sharon is so much more than what people can see. Just like everyone else, really.

repr0b8 April 24 2008, 23:23:24 UTC

I just found this, and wow am I glad I didn't miss it. You did a wonderful job of capturing these moments, these powerful moments, and bringing them to life.

Thank you for sharing, I loved this.

ahliadra April 27 2008, 05:54:45 UTC

Aw, thanks for reading, Jeff!

Glad to see you around again. I tried to make this story work, and I'm happy to see that it has. It was important for me to get right. Thank you once again!