Comments | aheartfulofyou: "Divulgence"--- (Nathan/Peter; NC-17)

aheartfulofyou

"Divulgence"--- (Nathan/Peter; NC-17)

Jul 19, 2007 00:31

Title: Divulgence
Author: aheartfulofyou
Rating: NC-17 (sexual situations)
Pairings: Nathan/Peter
Words: 1,929
Settings/Spoilers: S1 (early episodes)
Notes: Sort of an angst/smut combo. Why, no, Daddy, of course I wasn't writing incestuous, gay pornography while you were at the store. *Shifty eyes*. Warnings include sex and incest, and some minor language. ( Read more... )

heroes, pr0n, nathan/peter, slash, angst, fanfic, incest, smut

Comments 20

g_shadowslayer July 19 2007, 05:39:00 UTC

Oh, the aaaaaaangst! Beautiful and painful, this!

aheartfulofyou July 19 2007, 05:42:16 UTC

Thank you so much!

entangled_now July 19 2007, 07:19:30 UTC

Oh Nathan has to make everything so angsty and difficult. Sometimes he holds back so hard it just hurts. This was lovely with beautiful Nathan reactions.

Also, It's very awesome that I managed to inspire something!

aheartfulofyou July 24 2007, 18:10:06 UTC

Thank you so much, and thanks for the inspiration! Because it really was all your fault. :D

nakeno July 19 2007, 08:10:04 UTC

This was beautifully executed. (In that smutty way I like.) It was self-fulfilling prophecy and yet 'the future isn't written in stone.'

You can almost feel the weight of Nathan's own disapproval of himself for allowing it-- for wanting it, because despite what he's seen on paper, he knows it doesn't mean it's a track that must be followed-- and it's wonderful watching him struggle with his own scruples. Which he does here by almost detaching himself the situation until Peter's warmth and reassurance creeps past his barriers. If only momentarily.

Love the way Peter, while awkward, runs into it with the reckless passion he shows for nearly everything. And, being as how nothing is quite more dear to him than his brother, it's lovely the way you allowed his insecurities to be the wave that ended up pushing him forward into accepting this path into future instead of being an echo of Nathan: hating himself for doing so ( ... )

aheartfulofyou July 24 2007, 18:12:02 UTC

No, don't apologize for long comments! It makes me feel really, really astounded and grateful, so thank you so much. Really glad you liked it.

callmeang July 19 2007, 14:32:25 UTC

Wow. That was so so so good. Your angst is so there and so subtle, yeah seeping into the pores -- my heart hurt so much for Peter. He wants it so bad, and Nathan so fights him, just giving enough...

Gah, that was so incredible.

aheartfulofyou July 24 2007, 18:14:03 UTC

Thank you so much!

ladywilde80 July 20 2007, 03:34:12 UTC

This was almost painful to read but in a good way. The emotions were so real but gawd! that was beautiful...heartbreaking really. I loved this.

aheartfulofyou July 24 2007, 18:14:58 UTC

The real emotions comment is such a huge compliment. Thank you so much!