Comments | ahavah: NaNo 2012: The Dragon Alliance (take two)

ahavah

NaNo 2012: The Dragon Alliance (take two) - Feedback wanted!

Oct 29, 2012 10:50

I'm leaving it off my writing filter for now, because I'm hoping maybe some fantasy readers (whether you write or not) might read the synopsis and be willing to give me some feedback. Be brutally honest! This year, I'm redoing my idea from last year, fleshing it out more, and working on an outline. I'm hoping to get a FULL first draft finished in ( Read more... )

dragon alliance, nanowrimo, writing, dragons

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angelofmysoul October 31 2012, 02:45:02 UTC

How do the dragons work? Does she really need the alimony/support financially? I guess that's my big thing I see. I'm going to assume that when the children are born, you will then work on Linnea's quest or will you work back and forth between them as kind of forlorn lovers which could then really piss off the dragon. Unless she's just needing the carnal thing.

I think a blend of all could be the key. If the Dragons were the hierarchy of the Magical races... then with their return, maybe the others could be located since she's searching for the Goddess's anyway. :)

ahavah October 31 2012, 12:54:22 UTC

This got long. My apologies! It's also early, so I hope it's coherent ( ... )

I like it! angelofmysoul November 1 2012, 22:33:05 UTC

That makes a little more sense. :) Go for it!

Re: I like it! ahavah November 2 2012, 12:11:10 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad to hear it! Please feel free to share what your favorite or least favorite concepts are. I'm still not 100% sure where to send Linnea or who my main antagonist should be.