Comments | agt_spooky: Supernatural RPS fic: Shadows in His Eyes (Jensen/Jared) 5/5

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Supernatural RPS fic: Shadows in His Eyes (Jensen/Jared) 5/5

Feb 22, 2010 06:46

Title: Shadows in His Eyes
Author: agt_spooky
Pairing: Jensen/Jared
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 45,121
Genre: Police AU
Warnings/Spoilers: domestic violence themes
Disclaimer: It’s RPS, people. It never happened, but I wish it would. :-)
Author’s Notes: Many thanks to sn_24lover, charityflint and queeberquabbler for their beta work and invaluable input. Thank you for being my cheerleaders!

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Comments 248

jsluv February 22 2010, 14:59:53 UTC

I finished it WooHoo!!! What an amazing Touching, HOT, beautiful story I freaking loved all of it, WOW I'm kind of Speechless right now ans for me that is saying something. LOL. Great Job Really Just Thank you so much for sharing this with all of us.:)

agt_spooky February 24 2010, 01:59:25 UTC

Thank you so much for your fantastic feedback! I truly, truly appreciate it and I'm thrilled you enjoyed the story. :-)

dawnstarrising February 22 2010, 16:30:24 UTC

Absolutely brilliant. I think you dealt with the issues very well.

Big thumbs up from me!

Thanks for sharing

D x

agt_spooky February 24 2010, 02:00:05 UTC

Thank you so much! I was a bit leery writing a story about domestic violence, so it means a lot that you thought I handled it well. :-)

heather03nmg February 22 2010, 17:02:44 UTC

Wow, that was amazing. I couldn't stop reading. Great pacing and an awesome plot. Plus pretty boys and steamy love scenes. What's not to love!!

agt_spooky February 24 2010, 02:02:19 UTC

Wow, thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :-)

iamoutoftime February 22 2010, 17:24:06 UTC

OMG... I haven't finished reading yet. But I had to jump to the last page to tell you how much I'm loving it. It's got everything! Exactly what I need right now. These are no fun times for a bottom!Jared girl like me. I feel lucky I found your fics. I love your Jensen A LOT. Well, I love Jensen. Full stop. And your fics. Gotta go back to the story now. x

*bounces away*

agt_spooky February 24 2010, 02:03:20 UTC

Awww, thank you for your great feedback! Told ya there was lots of top!Jensen in it. :-) I'm so happy you enjoyed the story!

iamoutoftime February 24 2010, 23:41:43 UTC

I finished reading it by now and I'm not sure if i've re-read it yet but some of the scenes and/or phrases I seem to remember them now as I had read the story a hundred times since Monday. Sounds odd, I know. But to me that means I liked it beyond words...

I would have said AU wasn't really my cup of tea. But now that I've found a writer I enjoy so much, I feel I can read everything! You've already made a better reader out of me. ;)

Last thing from me for now, I really liked Jared as a police officer. He does have the kind of warmth you gave the character. That's the kind of role I'd like to see him playing. Like in F13 when he hugs his sister... I felt like he was hugging me. Oh lucky Jensen...

agt_spooky February 26 2010, 20:37:56 UTC

Wow, thank you so much for your lovely feedback!

It means a lot that you decided to give this a try since you don't normally read AU's.

Thank you for letting me know that I wrote Jared so well, I appreciate that. It's hard to write AU's but still keep the personality of the real person. I'm glad to know I succeeded in that. :-)

Again, thanks, and I'm thrilled you liked it!

bluesheart February 22 2010, 18:09:06 UTC

LOVE THIS STORY!! So much that I am reading it work, when I should be actually working :)

agt_spooky February 24 2010, 02:04:17 UTC

LOL! Uh, oh, I'm the one to blame for low office productivity yesterday! Thank you for your feedback and I'm very happy you enjoyed it. :-)