Comments | agoodsign: Fic: You're My Kind of Right (R, Kirk/McCoy)

agoodsign

Fic: You're My Kind of Right (R, Kirk/McCoy)

Dec 11, 2009 06:00

Title: You're My Kind of Right
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Rating: R
Warnings: Angst
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Word Count: ~ 3600
Summary: Bones and Jim are both spending Christmas on campus. Jim is pleasantly surprised by his Christmas present.
Disclaimer: These characters do not belong to me. No copyright infringement is intended.
Note: Written for the space_wrapped ( Read more... )

length: short story, pairing: kirk/mccoy, fanfic challenge: space_wrapped, .fanfic, fandom: star trek reboot, rating: r

Comments 20

melovetv December 11 2009, 21:19:53 UTC

Aww - that's lovely. Just what I needed to read tonight. I like how they acknowledge that there're things to be worked out, but they are willing to do that!

agoodsign December 12 2009, 08:46:18 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! I'm happy that you liked it :D

easilymused1956 December 11 2009, 22:53:27 UTC

Very nice. Beautiful that they get what they want.

Renee

agoodsign December 12 2009, 08:46:57 UTC

Thank you for reading!

weepingnaiad December 11 2009, 23:23:09 UTC

AWWW... that was lovely! Love how they're there for each other even when things aren't so happy. And, Jim's musing about how he wanted a real relationship with Bones was wonderful!

And, yeah, I can just imagine Jim'd be easily slayed by Joanna McCoy if she looked and acted like her dad.

agoodsign December 12 2009, 09:02:45 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind feedback. Kirk & McCoy are definitely two of my favorites because they seem like they'd be interesting to play with in both good times and bad. I'm glad this worked for you :D And you guys are awesome for putting this together!

sangueuk December 11 2009, 23:42:09 UTC

I don't have the words to tell you how utterly perfect that was. They way you draw their lonliness in the lead up to Christmas was heart-breaking and Jim's angst was just the right amount of regret without tipping over into OC. Loved it!
Apart from The Kiss, this was my favourite part:

You talk about me with your daughter. A lot. Face it, Bones. You'd miss me if I wasn't around."

"No, I'd get a lot more work done."

"You'd be lonely and bored, admit it."

"It would be so peaceful I'd hardly notice you were gone at all."

Thank you for contributing to this comm!

agoodsign December 12 2009, 09:10:08 UTC

YAY :D That bit right there actually comes straight from my delirious mind! LOL, I wrote it when I was staying up at all hours for--anyway, I'm glad that it worked for you.

And thank you so much for organizing this. I look forward to next year. Or, Christmas in July, y/n? LOL Anyway, thanks for all your work and for commenting too.

blcwriter December 12 2009, 00:22:31 UTC

Nicely done.

agoodsign December 12 2009, 09:10:51 UTC

Thank you so much for reading :D