[LJ Idol Season 9 Topic 22: Sweep The Leg]

[agirlnamedluna]

There was a light at the end of the tunnel.

It was weak, and flickering, but it was enough to make her run as fast as she could. It was enough to make her ignore the pain, to go the extra mile on uneven ground. Enough … until the light collapsed on her.

***“Coffee

Comments

[favoritebean]

Very nicely done.

[agirlnamedluna]

Thank you!

[adoptedwriter]

Well written. Wow! AW

[agirlnamedluna]

Thank you!

[alycewilson]

It's like "The Hunger Games" meets "Survivor"! Interesting concept.

[agirlnamedluna]

Thank you! I did think of The Hunger Games after.

[mamas_minion]

This was wonderfully done.

[agirlnamedluna]

Thank you!

[i_17bingo]

...he liked the cliché too much to switch entirely to his tablet...

At this point I had no idea where this was going--I just liked it. Peter is... cool. It's weird, but I sincerely thought Peter was cool.

And then... it took a turn. A weird, hardcore turn; and when mingled with Peter and betrayal and the nastiness of the Hunger (for Something Different) Games, it turned into a metaphor, and I love it.

[agirlnamedluna]

Thank you. I wanted Peter to be a bit blasé, but at the same time, not the uber jerk he really is. At least not from the start.