Comments | agirlnamedlilyx: All Work and No Play Make Tom a Dull Boy [2/2 for now]

agirlnamedlilyx

All Work and No Play Make Tom a Dull Boy [2/2 for now]

Apr 03, 2009 09:32

( All Work and No Play Make Tom a Dull Boy [2/2 for now] )

genre: smut, rating: nc-17, genre: romance, pairing: flones

Comments 18

stolenglancesx April 3 2009, 15:17:16 UTC

*squee*

Awesome.
:)

*would like very much to see this security tape...*

♥

mamia94 April 3 2009, 18:42:56 UTC

I concur.

agirlnamedlilyx April 3 2009, 20:56:39 UTC

Thanks :)

Maybe Tom and Danny should make a series of security tapes ;O
Now wouldn't that be something...?

snowinginjune April 3 2009, 16:54:10 UTC

oh gosh! hahahahah totally awesome

agirlnamedlilyx April 3 2009, 20:57:01 UTC

Thanks :)

fatal_scribbles April 3 2009, 17:09:09 UTC

You've got quite a few typos, I cba to find them all but: "pausing over Tom's hard" I guess you mean 'hard on'? and "his boyfriends head" should be 'his boyfriend's head' etc... My top tip is to type your fics in Word and then copy and paste them over, so you don't have to settle for the crappy LJ spellcheck, and then all your grammar and spelling gets done without a beta ;)

...Aside from that, hot damn woman! (assuming you're female, you are, right?) Mmm, smut. Flones smut, the best kind. Defo for the sequel here!! Yum. Oh my, I want that tape.... ♥

Oh, I know what you mean about school, guh. I have two weeks off now though yay!!

agirlnamedlilyx April 3 2009, 20:55:41 UTC

Sorry for all the typos. I'm not currently on a computer that wishes for Microsoft Word to be easy for me, so I apologize. I'll get them fixed shortly, and thank you for pointing them out :)

I think everyone would want that tape, they'd be insane no to ♥ (and you've assumed right, ten points for you.)

Thanks for reading :)

asu_chan April 3 2009, 17:42:42 UTC

*bigsmileallthetime* <---it`s your fault :)
I love your fic! I`m still smiling and smiling...I can`t do anything else. I just...love it. Flones = OTP.
Poor Tom that he didn`t know (or forgot) that there were videocameras. *biggrin* Hahaha <3
I just love it (oh, I just say that, sorry ;))!

agirlnamedlilyx April 3 2009, 20:58:27 UTC

Aww, glad you liked it :)

I think a sequel has been demanded enough that after I return home from my plans today, I'll get started on part three :O

(I'm mostly writing the sequel just for the sheer fact that Flones is the best thing since air.)

stolenglancesx April 3 2009, 22:44:37 UTC

Pleeeaase, Flones is better than air. Not the best thing since air, lol :D

x

asu_chan April 11 2009, 18:08:14 UTC

Yeah, Flones is the best pairing. ^-^

I`m looking forward to the sequel! *smile*

Thread 5

martymcfly_x April 4 2009, 03:06:07 UTC

Ooosshhh!
Lily! Amamzing!
I lurve the Flonesiness :D
SEQUEL? HELL YES!
Btw Cara is totally me in this story...I mean
I woulda took the tape home and everything...

agirlnamedlilyx April 4 2009, 04:39:34 UTC

CHEERS TO A SEQUEL THAT I AM ABOUT TO WRITE RIGHT NOW! <3

martymcfly_x April 4 2009, 05:15:24 UTC

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HELL YES!